The other side eh.. a nice way of saying it...I just tasted the other side of love...
the bitterness turn my blood cold
my senses of touch
my sense of smell
my sense of sight
now leaves me blind
The poem overall .. is.. quite good.. it's nicely written and...the flow was very nice... i would say more use of powerful words would make this poem better and... hmm... methaphores are fun when you are writing a poem... try making some to make your poem better...
and ps.. : hmm.. this poem was sad and depressing... sheesh it was nice cause the emotion flourish in it ^^ nicely done... i hate sad poems.. *yawns*