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    I am the nothingness in the deep
    mist feel me washing over you let
    me crash right into you

    things are never what they seem
    and you just shine right though me
    you are the only one you see now
    your fadding right bfore me

    I dont want to be here anymore i
    will cose my tear filled eyes cause
    i know that you are waiting for me
    on the other side

    why cant you fix my heart of pain
    knowing that things will never be the
    same you were my love my hope and
    dreams now your leaving life up to me

    I dont want to do this anymore i will
    close my blood shot eyes cause i know
    that you are waiting for me on the other
    side

    they say that time it heals the pain and
    nothing is what remains a hole has been
    placed in my sole lonelyness is now what
    i know

    so tell me that i dont have to be here anymore
    let me close my aching eyes cause i know
    that you are always watching me from the other
    side







    For my Uncle Tony may you rest in peace

    10/16/79 to 1/14/06
    Last edited by zig93; May 27, 2007 at 10:27 AM.

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    Re: Otherside

    this poem is great , describing how you love some
    one so much that every fiber of youyr being seems
    to feel and need what your significant other has to offer
    then they just pass on to a better life leaving you alone
    with nothing to hold on to but memory's.

    this is what i got from the poem and its sad and
    my condolences if this has happend to you if i read this
    right , i loved this poem alot and i have never felt that kind
    of pain but this poem sort lets some of the emotion out
    so i can almost feel the loss and love but not all the way since
    i have yet to experince it.

    i hope to read more from you because i like how
    this poem left me sad and missing some really
    awesome famly .
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Otherside

    Oooohhhh how cute you show your affection on that person!! It's so romantic! I'm a sucker for romance things!!!! I hope to see more later!
    「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」

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    Re: Otherside

    Sometimes I just have to get things out there to help me cope and pomes is a way that I can do that. Do ever just need your pen to tell people how you feel cause your words get in the way. I write cause it brings peace in a world full of confusion it lifts the mist. Well thank you for your postive feed back and I am glad that you liked it, both of you. It is not one of my better ones, but it was what i was feeling at the time thank you

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