Thread: Otherside

this poem is great , describing how you love some
one so much that every fiber of youyr being seems
to feel and need what your significant other has to offer
then they just pass on to a better life leaving you alone
with nothing to hold on to but memory's.

this is what i got from the poem and its sad and
my condolences if this has happend to you if i read this
right , i loved this poem alot and i have never felt that kind
of pain but this poem sort lets some of the emotion out
so i can almost feel the loss and love but not all the way since
i have yet to experince it.

i hope to read more from you because i like how
this poem left me sad and missing some really
awesome famly .

Oooohhhh how cute you show your affection on that person!! It's so romantic! I'm a sucker for romance things!!!! I hope to see more later!

Sometimes I just have to get things out there to help me cope and pomes is a way that I can do that. Do ever just need your pen to tell people how you feel cause your words get in the way. I write cause it brings peace in a world full of confusion it lifts the mist. Well thank you for your postive feed back and I am glad that you liked it, both of you. It is not one of my better ones, but it was what i was feeling at the time thank you