Our dream

KuwiRules145 · Jun 01, 2007, 04:37 PM

My nightmares began to scare my heart away
As my fears began to start everyday
My tears had flooded everywhere
But you had suddenly appeared here
Every time you came closer it came more brighter
Every time we touch I felt more lighter
We had finally got our kissed
No matter how much we would be missed
So there I closed my eyes for a while
And saw your gently smile
But once you left that morning
That storm came back roaming
So I waited for you day and night
As you finally came in sight
So I ran to hug you so tightly
A while I touch your face so lightly
You did the same
Making me quietly tame
I knew you felt my heart beat fast
As we both wanted this to last
But it wasn't real as it seems
Cause we both woke up knowing it was all dreams
So we both knew next time if we sleep together as a team
We'll try to make it a everlasting dream

I got really bored so I hope you guys like it.

*Lasura* · Jun 01, 2007, 04:48 PM

I liked it... it's a great poem for one that was made just because of boredom!!!

I enjoyed reading it... It's very nice, lovely... and sad...
Good work!

KuwiRules145 · Jun 01, 2007, 04:51 PM

I thank you so much Lasura! I really thank you. I really did need that comment right now.

*dark1angel* · Jun 01, 2007, 04:55 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by KuwiRules145

I thank you so much Lasura! I really thank you. I really did need that comment right now.

Maybe i was wrong about leaving you but i had to move on because i had no otehr happiness but with the true love i had desired teh most but i know this may not relate to your topic but i would prefer to regret in ever saying of not letting you go.

KuwiRules145 · Jun 01, 2007, 04:59 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by dark1angel

Maybe i was wrong about leaving you but i had to move on because i had no otehr happiness but with the true love i had desired teh most but i know this may not relate to your topic but i would prefer to regret in ever saying of not letting you go.

I guess I thank you for your comment as well....I thank you so much anyway!

fallenangel25 · Jun 01, 2007, 05:09 PM

you left kuwi? I outta knock you upside the head...! kuwi is a wonderful person and a great friend! and you just sweep her away like shes nothing...u dont deserve such a lady! Kuwi its a wonderful poem, i cant add much more atm,this guys got me really ticked off.

Little negi sensei · Jun 10, 2007, 10:57 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by fallenangel25

you left kuwi? I outta knock you upside the head...! kuwi is a wonderful person and a great friend! and you just sweep her away like shes nothing...u dont deserve such a lady! Kuwi its a wonderful poem, i cant add much more atm,this guys got me really ticked off.

Im second then!!!Hey you write such great pomes with such artistic talent great job!!

*HolderOfTheDarkChalice* · Jun 10, 2007, 04:16 PM

very awesome poem i loved it
and the reality of lve is best shown in
this poem because no matter how much you
do love someone if they cant truly return it and they
leave it is better than living a lie just to make you happy.

and im sorry you were left like that but writing is the best
way to express how you feel you did great

KuwiRules145 · Jun 13, 2007, 11:09 AM

Hey everybody calm down really! I'm ok! And thanks for the comments anyway! I thank you very much! I really thank you!

aeonking · Jun 13, 2007, 12:19 PM

love this poem it's kinda dark and also about dreams and dreams are cool so great job loved it

KuwiRules145 · Jun 13, 2007, 12:26 PM

I thank you for your comment as well! I thank you so much!

Jun 01, 2007, 04:37 PM	#1 (permalink)
KuwiRules145 Tournaments Won: 2 ♡♥I love you Kyle Kun!♥♡ Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: In my lovers heart Posts: 963 Thanks: 3 Thanked 24 Times in 16 Posts Credits: 13,226	Our dream My nightmares began to scare my heart away As my fears began to start everyday My tears had flooded everywhere But you had suddenly appeared here Every time you came closer it came more brighter Every time we touch I felt more lighter We had finally got our kissed No matter how much we would be missed So there I closed my eyes for a while And saw your gently smile But once you left that morning That storm came back roaming So I waited for you day and night As you finally came in sight So I ran to hug you so tightly A while I touch your face so lightly You did the same Making me quietly tame I knew you felt my heart beat fast As we both wanted this to last But it wasn't real as it seems Cause we both woke up knowing it was all dreams So we both knew next time if we sleep together as a team We'll try to make it a everlasting dream I got really bored so I hope you guys like it. __________________ ♡♥♡♥No matter what I'll always love you for Eternity...I love you Kyle♥♡♥♡ Never let me go... hold me tight and love me like I do ♡♥Anime Life♥♡
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Lasura Angelic Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: In a Demon's Arms Posts: 1,872 Thanks: 56 Thanked 34 Times in 31 Posts Credits: 49,619	Re: Our dream I liked it... it's a great poem for one that was made just because of boredom!!! I enjoyed reading it... It's very nice, lovely... and sad... Good work! __________________ My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge
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KuwiRules145 Tournaments Won: 2 ♡♥I love you Kyle Kun!♥♡ Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: In my lovers heart Posts: 963 Thanks: 3 Thanked 24 Times in 16 Posts Credits: 13,226	Re: Our dream I thank you so much Lasura! I really thank you. I really did need that comment right now. __________________ ♡♥♡♥No matter what I'll always love you for Eternity...I love you Kyle♥♡♥♡ Never let me go... hold me tight and love me like I do ♡♥Anime Life♥♡
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fallenangel25 Newbie Join Date: May 2007 Location: Inbetween Heaven & Hell Posts: 85 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 310	Re: Our dream you left kuwi? I outta knock you upside the head...! kuwi is a wonderful person and a great friend! and you just sweep her away like shes nothing...u dont deserve such a lady! Kuwi its a wonderful poem, i cant add much more atm,this guys got me really ticked off. __________________ [/url]
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HolderOfTheDarkChalice Tournaments Won: 1 King Of Darkness Join Date: May 2006 Location: someplace where the only light is the moon above Posts: 2,839 Thanks: 34 Thanked 33 Times in 31 Posts Credits: 5,581	Re: Our dream very awesome poem i loved it and the reality of lve is best shown in this poem because no matter how much you do love someone if they cant truly return it and they leave it is better than living a lie just to make you happy. and im sorry you were left like that but writing is the best way to express how you feel you did great __________________
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Jun 13, 2007, 11:09 AM	#9 (permalink)
KuwiRules145 Tournaments Won: 2 ♡♥I love you Kyle Kun!♥♡ Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: In my lovers heart Posts: 963 Thanks: 3 Thanked 24 Times in 16 Posts Credits: 13,226	Re: Our dream Hey everybody calm down really! I'm ok! And thanks for the comments anyway! I thank you very much! I really thank you! __________________ ♡♥♡♥No matter what I'll always love you for Eternity...I love you Kyle♥♡♥♡ Never let me go... hold me tight and love me like I do ♡♥Anime Life♥♡
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aeonking Diamond in the Rough Join Date: May 2007 Location: In the shadows Posts: 231 Thanks: 3 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Credits: 2,711	Re: Our dream love this poem it's kinda dark and also about dreams and dreams are cool so great job loved it __________________
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KuwiRules145 Tournaments Won: 2 ♡♥I love you Kyle Kun!♥♡ Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: In my lovers heart Posts: 963 Thanks: 3 Thanked 24 Times in 16 Posts Credits: 13,226	Re: Our dream I thank you for your comment as well! I thank you so much! __________________ ♡♥♡♥No matter what I'll always love you for Eternity...I love you Kyle♥♡♥♡ Never let me go... hold me tight and love me like I do ♡♥Anime Life♥♡
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