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    Our dream

    My nightmares began to scare my heart away
    As my fears began to start everyday
    My tears had flooded everywhere
    But you had suddenly appeared here
    Every time you came closer it came more brighter
    Every time we touch I felt more lighter
    We had finally got our kissed
    No matter how much we would be missed
    So there I closed my eyes for a while
    And saw your gently smile
    But once you left that morning
    That storm came back roaming
    So I waited for you day and night
    As you finally came in sight
    So I ran to hug you so tightly
    A while I touch your face so lightly
    You did the same
    Making me quietly tame
    I knew you felt my heart beat fast
    As we both wanted this to last
    But it wasn't real as it seems
    Cause we both woke up knowing it was all dreams
    So we both knew next time if we sleep together as a team
    We'll try to make it a everlasting dream

    I got really bored so I hope you guys like it.
    「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」

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    Re: Our dream

    I liked it... it's a great poem for one that was made just because of boredom!!!
    I enjoyed reading it... It's very nice, lovely... and sad...
    Good work!

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    I thank you so much Lasura! I really thank you. I really did need that comment right now.
    「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」

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    Re: Our dream

    Quote Originally Posted by KuwiRules145 View Post
    I thank you so much Lasura! I really thank you. I really did need that comment right now.
    Maybe i was wrong about leaving you but i had to move on because i had no otehr happiness but with the true love i had desired teh most but i know this may not relate to your topic but i would prefer to regret in ever saying of not letting you go.

    Magic intervenes when there is love in first sight.
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    Re: Our dream

    Quote Originally Posted by dark1angel View Post
    Maybe i was wrong about leaving you but i had to move on because i had no otehr happiness but with the true love i had desired teh most but i know this may not relate to your topic but i would prefer to regret in ever saying of not letting you go.

    I guess I thank you for your comment as well....I thank you so much anyway!
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    you left kuwi? I outta knock you upside the head...! kuwi is a wonderful person and a great friend! and you just sweep her away like shes nothing...u dont deserve such a lady! Kuwi its a wonderful poem, i cant add much more atm,this guys got me really ticked off.
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    Re: Our dream

    Quote Originally Posted by fallenangel25 View Post
    you left kuwi? I outta knock you upside the head...! kuwi is a wonderful person and a great friend! and you just sweep her away like shes nothing...u dont deserve such a lady! Kuwi its a wonderful poem, i cant add much more atm,this guys got me really ticked off.
    Im second then!!!Hey you write such great pomes with such artistic talent great job!!

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    Re: Our dream

    very awesome poem i loved it
    and the reality of lve is best shown in
    this poem because no matter how much you
    do love someone if they cant truly return it and they
    leave it is better than living a lie just to make you happy.

    and im sorry you were left like that but writing is the best
    way to express how you feel you did great
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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