KuwiRules145

My nightmares began to scare my heart away
As my fears began to start everyday
My tears had flooded everywhere
But you had suddenly appeared here
Every time you came closer it came more brighter
Every time we touch I felt more lighter
We had finally got our kissed
No matter how much we would be missed
So there I closed my eyes for a while
And saw your gently smile
But once you left that morning
That storm came back roaming
So I waited for you day and night
As you finally came in sight
So I ran to hug you so tightly
A while I touch your face so lightly
You did the same
Making me quietly tame
I knew you felt my heart beat fast
As we both wanted this to last
But it wasn't real as it seems
Cause we both woke up knowing it was all dreams
So we both knew next time if we sleep together as a team
We'll try to make it a everlasting dream

I got really bored so I hope you guys like it.

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Lasura

I liked it... it's a great poem for one that was made just because of boredom!!!
I enjoyed reading it... It's very nice, lovely... and sad...
Good work!

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My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

KuwiRules145

I thank you so much Lasura! I really thank you. I really did need that comment right now.

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dark1angel

Maybe i was wrong about leaving you but i had to move on because i had no otehr happiness but with the true love i had desired teh most but i know this may not relate to your topic but i would prefer to regret in ever saying of not letting you go.

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KuwiRules145

I guess I thank you for your comment as well....I thank you so much anyway!

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fallenangel25

you left kuwi? I outta knock you upside the head...! kuwi is a wonderful person and a great friend! and you just sweep her away like shes nothing...u dont deserve such a lady! Kuwi its a wonderful poem, i cant add much more atm,this guys got me really ticked off.

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Little negi sensei

Im second then!!!Hey you write such great pomes with such artistic talent great job!!

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That my friend, Is the cat that saw you naked.

HolderOfTheDarkChalice

very awesome poem i loved it
and the reality of lve is best shown in
this poem because no matter how much you
do love someone if they cant truly return it and they
leave it is better than living a lie just to make you happy.

and im sorry you were left like that but writing is the best
way to express how you feel you did great

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