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    Our Ever Lasting Love

    The day I saw you once more and our eyes met for the first time in awhile,
    My heart was beating fast and I lost my breath… just seeing you again brought everything back.

    Seeing you once more brought back all the strong feelings I had for you…
    Then we got closer and became friends again,
    Being held in your arms just feels so right.

    Being with you once again feels so right it’s a dream come true,
    Just knowing your mine once more brings a smile to my face.

    When you hold me I feel safe and warm… when you kiss me sparks flow between us,
    When I’m with you there’s no place I rather be.

    When I’m around you I’m filed with joy and happiness,
    When I dream it’s always of you…

    Knowing that this flame will never go out it burns for our ever lasting love,
    Our flame will never go out it shall burn forever.

    Were so close… you’re my friend, my love, my sole mate…
    Always forever just you and me that’s the way it’s meant to be.
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    *~A moment like this we will never be able to go back. Holding you like this wanting the time to stop. Just the two of us we don't need words.~*

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    Re: Our Ever Lasting Love

    i love that poem.............................................. ...................................
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    Re: Our Ever Lasting Love

    Quote Originally Posted by sabrina18 View Post
    i love that poem.............................................. ...................................
    Thanks girl I love my bf so much and I can't stop thinking about him I wish I could be with him right now lol

    *~A moment like this we will never be able to go back. Holding you like this wanting the time to stop. Just the two of us we don't need words.~*

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    Our Ever Lasting Love I have read this poem last Sunday.

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    Quote Originally Posted by alengrew View Post
    Our Ever Lasting Love I have read this poem last Sunday.
    Oh yeah so what do you think about it? I tried very had on this one I have a new one called How I Feel About You that is my fave so far. If you see it let me know what you think.

    *~A moment like this we will never be able to go back. Holding you like this wanting the time to stop. Just the two of us we don't need words.~*

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    Quote Originally Posted by alengrew View Post
    Our Ever Lasting Love I have read this poem last Sunday.
    i love this poem it is so beatuiful and strong it is very very good.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Shadow Dancer 86 View Post
    i love this poem it is so beatuiful and strong it is very very good.
    Thank you so much I worked hard of it. It took me awhile to finish I kept getting writers bloke lol. Check out if you haven't already my new poem called How I Feel Around You. I love that one the best!

    *~A moment like this we will never be able to go back. Holding you like this wanting the time to stop. Just the two of us we don't need words.~*

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    Re: Our Ever Lasting Love

    I get your point and your general feeling in writing this poem.After finally meeting your loved one after being parted with each other, you both felt so much joy and happiness.
    Because it's been a long time since you have been with each other, the things you wanted to with him that you are unabel because he is not around with you.I also felt this with someone though she is so close to me(my physical self) but she is so far away with me(my heart).Anyways, your poem shows so much love and affection to him.You've been longing to see him right? I'm happy that the both of you are finally with each other after longing for each for so long keep this up
    I loved her so much.... i would dare to risk my own life only to save her from dying....
    I loved my GF...
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