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    Re: Our Ever Lasting Love

    Quote Originally Posted by receiverofhell View Post
    I get your point and your general feeling in writing this poem.After finally meeting your loved one after being parted with each other, you both felt so much joy and happiness.
    Because it's been a long time since you have been with each other, the things you wanted to with him that you are unabel because he is not around with you.I also felt this with someone though she is so close to me(my physical self) but she is so far away with me(my heart).Anyways, your poem shows so much love and affection to him.You've been longing to see him right? I'm happy that the both of you are finally with each other after longing for each for so long keep this up
    Thank you. Yes I am talking about my ex who I got back together with and been with for 3 months. We are high school sweet hearts and being back with him just bring me such joy and inspired me to write poems again. Him and I known each other for 6 yrs and he got my a promise ring for christmas and never wants to be without me. Hes a really sweet guy.

    *~A moment like this we will never be able to go back. Holding you like this wanting the time to stop. Just the two of us we don't need words.~*

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    Re: Our Ever Lasting Love

    mainly i like this lines in this poem
    When I’m around you I’m filed with joy and happiness,
    When I dream it’s always of you…

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