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    Our First Date....

    I have no fear in loving you.
    Since you were once my charming blue.
    You know how to make me happy,
    make me love you and get me laughing.

    My lips locked with yours... moving in romance.
    My body shaking as of in a trance.
    We are kissing madly on the wall,
    being careful not to fall.

    My heart says, "im with you".
    You say,"Baby I love you too."
    After that, what could i say?
    Is it that I made a mistake?

    We are now together in bed.
    Once we stop, we will go again.
    Our romance will never stop
    Not until we are ready to drop.

    The bed is shaking,
    the neighbors are awaking.
    They envy our love,they envy our life,
    We just forget them, we don't want a fight.

    I soon realize, i did not make a mistake.
    We want a child together,it shall be our fate.
    Years later i could still remember....
    Our first date......
    Yeah, Bye.

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    Re: Our First Date....

    awww... I think its emotional and it has PERFECT rhyming. I like it! You-go-girl!


    Meow. :3

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    LOL Well thank you^^..It just came out of my head actually but thank you^^
    Yeah, Bye.

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    Really?! It just popped into your mind? You must be a real princess!


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    Re: Our First Date....

    Quote Originally Posted by katsoyori33 View Post
    Really?! It just popped into your mind? You must be a real princess!
    OK well umm.. thank you for that wonderful post. It was not very long so I did not really like it but thank you.^^
    Yeah, Bye.

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    OMG...this is such a good poem. it describes the words well and very clear. romance is in the air lol. good job. =}
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    Re: Our First Date....

    Quote Originally Posted by katsoyori33 View Post
    awww... I think its emotional and it has PERFECT rhyming. I like it! You-go-girl!
    WOW!!!!!!! it is emotional its really good i hope that u post more of ur great work ilovemyloser
    when the mask comes off the real me appeares

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    Angeli Bre =Aww thank you Ab^-^. I appreciate your comment^^


    hedgehog666= Really??? OMG thank you^^ I will try to post more soon. I dont join POTM b/c i don't have what it takes but i may try but still thank you^^
    Yeah, Bye.

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