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awww... I think its emotional and it has PERFECT rhyming. I like it! You-go-girl!
I have no fear in loving you.
Since you were once my charming blue.
You know how to make me happy,
make me love you and get me laughing.
My lips locked with yours... moving in romance.
My body shaking as of in a trance.
We are kissing madly on the wall,
being careful not to fall.
My heart says, "im with you".
You say,"Baby I love you too."
After that, what could i say?
Is it that I made a mistake?
We are now together in bed.
Once we stop, we will go again.
Our romance will never stop
Not until we are ready to drop.
The bed is shaking,
the neighbors are awaking.
They envy our love,they envy our life,
We just forget them, we don't want a fight.
I soon realize, i did not make a mistake.
We want a child together,it shall be our fate.
Years later i could still remember....
Our first date......
Yeah, Bye.
awww... I think its emotional and it has PERFECT rhyming. I like it! You-go-girl!
Meow. :3
iluvmyloser (Mar 17, 2008)
LOL Well thank you^^..It just came out of my head actually but thank you^^
Yeah, Bye.
Really?! It just popped into your mind? You must be a real princess!
Meow. :3
OK well umm.. thank you for that wonderful post. It was not very long so I did not really like it but thank you.^^Originally Posted by katsoyori33
Yeah, Bye.
OMG...this is such a good poem. it describes the words well and very clear. romance is in the air lol. good job. =}
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iluvmyloser (Mar 18, 2008)
WOW!!!!!!! it is emotional its really good i hope that u post more of ur great work ilovemyloser
when the mask comes off the real me appeares
iluvmyloser (Mar 18, 2008)
Angeli Bre =Aww thank you Ab^-^. I appreciate your comment^^
hedgehog666= Really??? OMG thank you^^ I will try to post more soon. I dont join POTM b/c i don't have what it takes but i may try but still thank you^^
Yeah, Bye.
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