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    Re: Our First Date....

    It sounds like a Shakespearian quatraine, very classy. I don' usually read the other poems here, except maybe atomik's. It's not that I don' think that there aren' incredible poets here, it's jus' that I'm usually busy. But I had the opportunity ta read this one and I was really impressed. I hope that u continue ta write more and grow wit ur poetry.

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    This is my 5th time to read this. And Im STILL impressed by your work. Keep it up! I cant wait for more, honey!


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    @ Joe-Thank you very much i appreciate you actually reading it^^ Thank ya bunch for your comment

    Yeah, Bye.

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    that is really good. i love it. i giggled in some parts like the neighbors.lol.
    i just liked that. it brought some humor into it.
    very good. i love it!!
    keep it up!
    hope to see more.

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    Àddïctëd tø |ăüghïñg :) Sonny Sunshine Champion, Volcano Champion, Aquarium Sprengischen Champion, Spiderman Web of Words Champion, Look Alive Champion iluvmyloser is off to a good start iluvmyloser's Avatar
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    Thank you^^ I tried to bring humor to this but all i got mostly were emotions...sorry^^ I'm glad you liked it^^. Thank you for your comment^^
    Yeah, Bye.

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    The poem ROCK!!!! The rhythmic stansas are good and the Emotional background is as well, the feeling behind it make it seem almost as if u were their, over all I give it a 10 out of 10. U ROCK iluvmyloser !!! WOOOT!
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    Really OMG THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^^

    I never expected many comments from this. Thank you More-Oni for your comment^^
    Yeah, Bye.

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    Re: Our First Date....

    A two page poem thread that consists almost entirely of low quality replies and thank you's from the author is a no-no. Use the Thanks button if that's all you have to say in response to other's posts on your work, and those of you replying to the poem need to put more thought than just "I like it" in your replies.

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