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    Our Heart's Rejection's...

    Our Heart's Rejection's


    Oh how I use to love you, But I can no longer look you in the eye
    My heart aches when I see him, Even though i'm with you
    I long for his touch, I no longer desire your's
    He was first, But he didn't want me...

    "Not the way I wanted him"

    My head said I needed you, But my heart screamed no not you
    I call out his name in my sleep, Or when i'm all alone
    I see him when I try to think of you, My mind is filled with him
    My heart only holds him, You are no longer inside...

    "My heart rejects you"

    Rejection is awful, I don't want to put you through it
    But my heart can no longer take this, The dreams wont stop
    He won't leave me be, He's inside of me
    My mind and heart all filled to the brim, Only he can make the pain go away...

    "You can no longer do anything"

    You were my savior at the time, I could never forget that
    He was the one to break me, You the one that saved me
    But I still long for him, Even though he won't look at me
    I've loved him for so long, I don't know how to stop...

    "This pain inside won't go away"

    His eyes are burned into my mind, My soul screams for him and not you
    Tears flow from my eyes, As you start to realize what is happening
    I cry for breaking your heart, As mine breaks along with you
    I want to wrap you in my embrace, But i'm afraid you'd push me away...

    "I'm afraid of such a rejection"

    He no longer utters a word to me, I can feel my heart begining to break and crack
    Yet you still hold out your arms to me, Even though i'm only useing you
    You know I no longer love you, Yet you keep telling me how much you adore me
    I can't help but to cry, Cause I can feel your tears as you say you love me...

    "Over and over...you won't stop"

    Oh how I use to love you, But I can no longer look you in the eye...it hurts to much
    My heart aches when I see him, Even though i'm with you...it breaks my heart
    I long for his touch, I no longer desire your's...I want to scream in despair
    He was first, But he didn't want me...I thought it was love at first site...

    "Not the way I wanted him, I meant nothing to him"

    My head said I needed you, But my heart screamed no not you...your not the one
    I call out his name in my sleep, Or when i'm all alone...I never think of you
    I see him when I try to think of you, My mind is filled with him...I feel like i'm about to burst
    My heart only holds him, You are no longer inside...you've been tossed aside...

    "My heart rejects you, I no longer want you"

    I seem to be putting you through what I went through, I don't mean to
    I guess I just want some satisfaction, Maybe some justice
    I would have loved to stay in your arms forever like you promised, But I can't live inside your fantasy no longer
    Though I don't want to live in reality, I feel like I don't want to live at all anymore...


    "His heart rejected me, And I in return rejected you
    I cry for breaking your heart, As you cry for my already broken one
    Your arms wraped safely around me, I can no longer hold on
    I just wanna let of this heart-breaking rejection...Help me let go...."


    These are my newest lyrics that i've been working on for the past few nights. I was inspired but 1 of my fav songs called "I Died For You" by Iced Earth and a few other things lol. I'm really happy with the out come of this piece and hope you all will enjoy it just as much as I did writting it. Please comment and tell me your thoughts. Thanks ^__^
    Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^

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    Re: Our Heart's Rejection's...

    Quote Originally Posted by Shinigami's_Angel View Post
    "His heart rejected me, And I in return rejected you
    I cry for breaking your heart, As you cry for my already broken one
    Your arms wraped safely around me, I can no longer hold on
    I just wanna let of this heart-breaking rejection...Help me let go...."

    This is my favorite part of the whole thing. It says some much with so little. Almost everyone has felt like that at one time or another in their life. The poem as a whole actually brought tears to my eyes. It kinda has the feel of been there done that to it. Atleast for me it does. Great work can't wait to see more.

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    Re: Our Heart's Rejection's...

    great job on the poem I don't really know what to say but i agree with fireandice that did say a lot.

    here is a bit of info you all should know. Dont beg for things do it yourself or else you wont get anything. dont let the little details run your life. when your down just keep on moving.

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    Re: Our Heart's Rejection's...

    I loved it! This is one of your best songs. I could relate alot to it cause I've felt like this in some of the relationships I've been in. Great job sis!
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