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Old Mar 05, 2007, 10:14 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Our love

Our love is one of a kind.
Our love will nevr be crushed.
Nothing can get in the way.
Or so I thought........
Our love is fadeing fast..
Trying to grasp onto whats still here.
Your so far away from me even though your right here holding my hand...
My tears have come and gone for so long now..
Waitting for you to notice that I'm loseing my way to you..
You've bulit this brige and wont let me pass..
Every time I think I'm almost there you push me farther back....
You look at me and cant see the pain and distance I'm feelling........
When I look in your eyes I cant see the flames that was once there...
You look into my eyes and see something that wasn't there before....
You finaly see the way you've hurt me,put me last and how I'm barely hanging on to your heart.....
The Distance between us faded quikly....
I crossed the brige........
And can feel the falmes from your eyes on me...
I can finaly feel your lips on mine and your heart in my hands....





Hope yall like it its about me and my boo lol.......
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Old Mar 05, 2007, 10:16 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Boo? For a boy?
Anyways lovely poem ^_^ Loved the last part. Happy ending.
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Old Mar 05, 2007, 10:29 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Awesome poem girl!!! I soooo loved it!! Yes and I can see how this is like you guys. Can't wait 2 see more of your work and hopefully I will. Ttyl then lol.
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Old Mar 06, 2007, 08:33 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Boo? For a boy?
Anyways lovely poem ^_^ Loved the last part. Happy ending.


boo for baby like ur bfs baby or something like that and thanks im glad u liked it
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Old Mar 06, 2007, 09:02 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Well Fredsboo, I had to come and leave my foxy paw prints on this poem and to tell you to keep up the good work! I looking forward to more from you in the near furture! Awesome job!

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Whoa. This was real good. I really loved it. I hope I get to see more of your work!

Keep up the good job. ^^
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Thanx everyone...I had hoped you liked it...I will have more believe me I have a lot more lol....
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