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Old May 19, 2006, 06:01 PM   #1 (permalink)
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you chew me up
and spit me out
enjoy the taste
ill leave in your mouth
you look at me
i look at you
neither of us know what to do
there mightt not
be another way to your heart
so i guess i'd better find a new way in
i shiver when i hear your name
think about you but its not the same
i wont be satisfued until im under your skin
immobilized by the thought of you
paraliyzed by the sight of you
beauty is what the eye beholds
so come to bed its getting late
theres no more time for us to waste
remeber how my body tastes
you feel your heart once again being to race
handsome
tender
soft
why do you look right through me
thinking
"NO"
i cant deny my feelings
growing strong
i try to keep on believeing
dreaming on
and every time i see you
i crave more
i wanna pull you closer
but you leave me feeling frozen
i can be
all you need
wont you please
stay with me
apologies, might have been
cant erase what i feel
choking
back emotion
i try to keep on hoping
for a way
a reason for both of us to
come in
close
i long for you to hold me
and though my dream is
slowly fading
i wanna be the object
of your passion but its hopeless
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Old May 19, 2006, 10:44 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Re: Our love (Poem)

Wow,
You poem brings up deep emotions. I think it could use a little work.
Like the spelling and some of the grammer. But after reading your poem.
Makes me want to have want you want. I kind of feel the same way as you do.
Well anyway I loved your poem.
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Old May 19, 2006, 11:01 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Re: Our love (Poem)

That was long! I think you should actually make it into a song. You can even put tabs from another song to it. I love it. Only when i think of it as a song. Cuz it is really long! Very sensual. Almost teasing!
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