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![]() ![]() Credits: 210 | you chew me up and spit me out enjoy the taste ill leave in your mouth you look at me i look at you neither of us know what to do there mightt not be another way to your heart so i guess i'd better find a new way in i shiver when i hear your name think about you but its not the same i wont be satisfued until im under your skin immobilized by the thought of you paraliyzed by the sight of you beauty is what the eye beholds so come to bed its getting late theres no more time for us to waste remeber how my body tastes you feel your heart once again being to race handsome tender soft why do you look right through me thinking "NO" i cant deny my feelings growing strong i try to keep on believeing dreaming on and every time i see you i crave more i wanna pull you closer but you leave me feeling frozen i can be all you need wont you please stay with me apologies, might have been cant erase what i feel choking back emotion i try to keep on hoping for a way a reason for both of us to come in close i long for you to hold me and though my dream is slowly fading i wanna be the object of your passion but its hopeless
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![]() ![]() Credits: 304 | Re: Our love (Poem) Wow, You poem brings up deep emotions. I think it could use a little work. Like the spelling and some of the grammer. But after reading your poem. Makes me want to have want you want. I kind of feel the same way as you do. Well anyway I loved your poem.
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![]() ![]() Credits: 701 | Re: Our love (Poem) That was long! I think you should actually make it into a song. You can even put tabs from another song to it. I love it. Only when i think of it as a song. Cuz it is really long! Very sensual. Almost teasing!
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