On Our Own

Akura13 · Jun 14, 2007, 01:52 AM

We'll do it all. Everything.
On our own.
We don't need anything.
Or anyone.
I don't quite know how to say
How I feel.
Those three words are said too much.
They're not enough.
Let's waste time laying here.
On our own.
I need your grace to remind me of
Who I am.

*Lasura* · Jun 14, 2007, 02:35 AM

I like this poem very much... it's short and lovely... A little bit of love, a little bit of confusion, a little bit of fear... Nicey!!!

I really, really like it! Enjoyed reading it! ^^ Waiting forward for the next one!

*HolderOfTheDarkChalice* · Jun 14, 2007, 03:10 AM

i like this poem alot because
of the fear of those 3 words
that are used so much , but when
it comes to love more than words
are needed because showing them
you love them would make saying it
not that important becuase that would
already know.

Akura13 · Jun 14, 2007, 02:25 PM

Awwwww, thanks u 2!! Yeah, believe it or not but this took me 5 hours to even think of!

Jun 14, 2007, 01:52 AM	#1 (permalink)
Akura13 ★Phantasmagoria★ Join Date: May 2007 Location: Chicago (I wish) Posts: 792 Thanks: 16 Thanked 37 Times in 34 Posts Credits: 19,648	On Our Own We'll do it all. Everything. On our own. We don't need anything. Or anyone. I don't quite know how to say How I feel. Those three words are said too much. They're not enough. Let's waste time laying here. On our own. I need your grace to remind me of Who I am.
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Jun 14, 2007, 02:35 AM	#2 (permalink)
Lasura Angelic Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: In a Demon's Arms Posts: 1,872 Thanks: 56 Thanked 34 Times in 31 Posts Credits: 49,619	Re: On Our Own I like this poem very much... it's short and lovely... A little bit of love, a little bit of confusion, a little bit of fear... Nicey!!! I really, really like it! Enjoyed reading it! ^^ Waiting forward for the next one! __________________ My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge
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Jun 14, 2007, 03:10 AM	#3 (permalink)
HolderOfTheDarkChalice Tournaments Won: 1 King Of Darkness Join Date: May 2006 Location: someplace where the only light is the moon above Posts: 2,839 Thanks: 34 Thanked 33 Times in 31 Posts Credits: 5,581	Re: On Our Own i like this poem alot because of the fear of those 3 words that are used so much , but when it comes to love more than words are needed because showing them you love them would make saying it not that important becuase that would already know. __________________
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Jun 14, 2007, 02:25 PM	#4 (permalink)
Akura13 ★Phantasmagoria★ Join Date: May 2007 Location: Chicago (I wish) Posts: 792 Thanks: 16 Thanked 37 Times in 34 Posts Credits: 19,648	Re: On Our Own Awwwww, thanks u 2!! Yeah, believe it or not but this took me 5 hours to even think of! __________________ *I'll Give My Heart To Someone Special...* Phantasmagoria Lives On In The Hearts Of Their Fans, Japanese AND English! click and save the dragons~!
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