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    Our song

    Some days you can't forget
    Some days just don't fade.....
    Why did it end like this?
    Do you see my tears on my face?....

    Without loving you I can't see
    All those special moments just can't leave
    The echoes of your voice fill my head
    The things I can't believe you said

    Take in the pain let out a cry
    With this I hang my head and sigh

    I see the the pain
    and I see the dreams

    But this time all I could see was the needs

    I needed you there for me
    but......as I sit here listening to our song, our song

    Confusion fills the room so long

    I just can't shine without you there
    Anger starts to show everywhere

    As I lay here thinking on my bed......
    our song...my eyes shut to it.....because.....the dream is gone and I am alone yet again

    Can I trust you to lead my way up your steps?
    Cant I follow in your dreams?....

    Please let me follow you so long
    Don't let this be our last son....

    The music stops
    _____________________

    Yes, I cried so much writing this one.
    I guess dreams can't last forever but we move on.....


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    Re: Our song

    Awww! Pyro that was sooo sad. "crys" It will get better I promis. I like how it all came together. Good work. can't wait to read more from you. always

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    Awww! Pyro that was sooo sad. It will get better I promise. I like how it all came together. Good job. can't wait to read more from you. bye
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    Re: Our song

    Aww this is really sad.. I feel so much emotion in this because I know what it feels like to be in such a position.. I like this poem.. keep up the work!
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    I don't think it's going to get any better since we broke up.
    But if you mean besides that, yea life goes on and we all flourish into the future.
    Thank you people for reading my poem.
    I haven't written anything in quite a while and all of this I just put together thought by thought.


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    Re: Our song

    That was a very heart felt poem. I know all to well how you are feeling. Great job and hope to see more from you. Tho less painful will work as well. Keep up the good work.

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    Re: Our song

    eek... cool ending... almost like death... @.@ nicely done... keep up the good work...

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