Out Of My Life(super short poem)

Akura13 · Jun 14, 2007, 02:37 AM

Keep talking that mess,
That's fine.
Can you walk and talk
At the same time?
Because I want you out.
Out of my life.
Forever.

*HolderOfTheDarkChalice* · Jun 14, 2007, 03:12 AM

short and to the point i like that
no draging it out makeing the tears
fall like they will , just ask them to go
and walk away before the tears have
a chnce to flow thats the best way to do
things

aeonking · Jun 14, 2007, 07:23 AM

wow just how many poems have you done there great post more please

Akura13 · Jun 14, 2007, 02:31 PM

lol I have a lot of poems my friends are starting to call me the Poem Master and it's annoying. But anyways it's fun to write poems and I was so incredibly happy when I found this place!

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Akura13 ★Phantasmagoria★ Join Date: May 2007 Location: Chicago (I wish) Posts: 792 Thanks: 16 Thanked 37 Times in 34 Posts Credits: 19,648	Out Of My Life(super short poem) Keep talking that mess, That's fine. Can you walk and talk At the same time? Because I want you out. Out of my life. Forever.
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HolderOfTheDarkChalice Tournaments Won: 1 King Of Darkness Join Date: May 2006 Location: someplace where the only light is the moon above Posts: 2,839 Thanks: 34 Thanked 33 Times in 31 Posts Credits: 5,581	Re: Out Of My Life(super short poem) short and to the point i like that no draging it out makeing the tears fall like they will , just ask them to go and walk away before the tears have a chnce to flow thats the best way to do things __________________
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aeonking Diamond in the Rough Join Date: May 2007 Location: In the shadows Posts: 231 Thanks: 3 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Credits: 2,711	Re: Out Of My Life(super short poem) wow just how many poems have you done there great post more please __________________
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Akura13 ★Phantasmagoria★ Join Date: May 2007 Location: Chicago (I wish) Posts: 792 Thanks: 16 Thanked 37 Times in 34 Posts Credits: 19,648	Re: Out Of My Life(super short poem) lol I have a lot of poems my friends are starting to call me the Poem Master and it's annoying. But anyways it's fun to write poems and I was so incredibly happy when I found this place! __________________ *I'll Give My Heart To Someone Special...* Phantasmagoria Lives On In The Hearts Of Their Fans, Japanese AND English! click and save the dragons~!
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