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    out of my mind

    Out of my Mind


    im naked in the forest of i-dont-know-where
    wind feels so good i let down my hair
    but its when people begin to gather and stare
    i realize im not in the forest im at the state fair.


    - i usually dont write anything but this just came to me and i thought it was so i wanted to see what others think of it.
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    Re: out of my mind

    honestly, its short and tasteless

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    Re: out of my mind

    tasteless and short, i'll try to work on the tastless bit but i cant guarantee it will be longer next time.
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