out of my mind

zombie#47 · Oct 29, 2006, 04:27 PM

Out of my Mind

im naked in the forest of i-dont-know-where
wind feels so good i let down my hair
but its when people begin to gather and stare
i realize im not in the forest im at the state fair.

- i usually dont write anything but this just came to me and i thought it was so i wanted to see what others think of it.

Shu · Oct 29, 2006, 04:28 PM

honestly, its short and tasteless

zombie#47 · Oct 29, 2006, 04:35 PM

tasteless and short, i'll try to work on the tastless bit but i cant guarantee it will be longer next time.

Oct 29, 2006, 04:27 PM	#1 (permalink)
zombie#47 Newbie Join Date: May 2006 Location: crapsville,illinois Posts: 26 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 260	out of my mind Out of my Mind im naked in the forest of i-dont-know-where wind feels so good i let down my hair but its when people begin to gather and stare i realize im not in the forest im at the state fair. - i usually dont write anything but this just came to me and i thought it was so i wanted to see what others think of it. __________________ _________________________________ zombie click
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Oct 29, 2006, 04:28 PM	#2 (permalink)
Shu Upcoming Legend Join Date: Mar 2006 Posts: 563 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Credits: 749	Re: out of my mind honestly, its short and tasteless
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Oct 29, 2006, 04:35 PM	#3 (permalink)
zombie#47 Newbie Join Date: May 2006 Location: crapsville,illinois Posts: 26 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 260	Re: out of my mind tasteless and short, i'll try to work on the tastless bit but i cant guarantee it will be longer next time. __________________ _________________________________ zombie click
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