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Jul 09, 2007, 06:31 PM
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  Àddïctëd tø |ăüghïñg :)  Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: No where near, New York.
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 Credits: 11,584 | with out u my love i dont feel like going anywhere! without u my love.... i can feel the clouds of rain passing by... but i cant be without u,...without u my love cant u hear me that our love is real cant u see me that its not a fairy tale cuz im not going anywhere without u my love......
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Jul 09, 2007, 06:55 PM
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| ♡♥I love you Kyle Kun!♥♡  Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: In my lovers heart
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Credits: 13,226 | Re: with out u my love I love the poem it was just so romantic!!!!! I just simply loved it really! I hope to see more really! 
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Jul 09, 2007, 07:11 PM
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| Àddïctëd tø |ăüghïñg :) Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: No where near, New York.
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Credits: 11,584 | Re: with out u my love awww thank u kiwi for the comment your so sweet thanks alot!!!!!♥the one and only princess=]
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Jul 09, 2007, 07:12 PM
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Credits: 3,553 | Re: with out u my love It's a nice poem. A little short, but it works fine with the theme. Keep up the good work. Also, make sure to capitalize the beginning of the sentences and the letter "I". It'll make it look better. 
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Jul 10, 2007, 08:43 PM
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Credits: 11,584 | Re: with out u my love ok thanks for the advice deo i will try ♥~*the princess*~♥
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