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    Àddïctëd tø |ăüghïñg :) Sonny Sunshine Champion, Volcano Champion, Aquarium Sprengischen Champion, Spiderman Web of Words Champion, Look Alive Champion iluvmyloser is off to a good start iluvmyloser's Avatar
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    with out u my love

    i dont feel like going anywhere!
    without u my love....
    i can feel the clouds of rain passing by...
    but i cant be without u,...without u my love
    cant u hear me that our love is real
    cant u see me that its not a fairy tale
    cuz im not going anywhere without u my love......
    Yeah, Bye.

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    Re: with out u my love

    I love the poem it was just so romantic!!!!! I just simply loved it really! I hope to see more really!
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    Re: with out u my love

    awww thank u kiwi for the comment your so sweet thanks alot!!!!!♥the one and only princess=]
    Yeah, Bye.

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    Re: with out u my love

    It's a nice poem. A little short, but it works fine with the theme. Keep up the good work. Also, make sure to capitalize the beginning of the sentences and the letter "I". It'll make it look better.

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    Re: with out u my love

    ok thanks for the advice deo i will try ♥~*the princess*~♥
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