Thread: with out you

i like this it shows a side of vulnerablility and sadness, but i suggest you put punctuations in between the phrases to make it look cleaner and will give the sentence the appearance that it is shorter.

Originally Posted by runebearer00

Every time i think
I dont know what to do
The only thing that comes up in my head
are all the thoughs of you
It makes me think
it makes me sad
that you just left me here
to be so sad
to go somewhere and not tell me why
I would follow you anywhere
Even if to die .....

lol this is really really really good XD .... u should rite more