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    Over the years

    Over the years I've hurt and pained,
    cursed and called out names,
    and even sent out much blame.

    I've let my blood hit the floor,
    on many occasion,
    and in every moment,
    thought about my situation.

    I've been up and down,
    tossed around.
    Tramps hurting my feeling,
    and making me frown.

    I've been in fake love,
    fake bliss...
    and even had a fake kiss...

    I've written thousands upon thousands,
    of litterarry notations.
    I've written about my every situation.

    I've written love most of all though,
    cause I never thought I'd have that so....

    I wrote about it,
    thinking I could know,
    what love truely was,
    and that some day I'd flow...

    with my poetry on a daily basis,
    and know that people liked it,
    by thier faces...

    and that I'd never write about the same...
    cause I'd never ever have that,
    the deep darkness,
    that is my pain.

    I feel I have that goodness now,
    in this forum that's been my life.
    Here's where I've met my friends....
    Here's where I reastablished myself again.

    It's been a long hard road,
    and though pain I've shed a plenty here...
    the ninja has finally been able,
    to hold onto something dear.

    My life has been like a novel,
    with many twists and turns and bends.
    I'm not sure where life will lead me,
    but I'm not at this book's end.

    I've found the one thing I've desired,
    for so long in my life.
    And one day I wish,
    to make this woman my wife.

    My life will continue on,
    till the day my body becomes,
    a part of the worldly garden.
    I've waited over all these years for this,
    and I've not been happier,
    since I can't remember when.


    By: Justin McCormick (White Rose)

    Far be it for me to be anything special, when the only special thing I desire with me, is the special person I share my gifts with.

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    Re: Over the years

    I really like this poem! i tihnk it is really good
    i hope to read more!
    there are no raindrops on roses but there are still tears in my eyes...

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    Re: Over the years

    wow i love it! keep it up!
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    Re: Over the years

    Very good. ^^ Very expressive which is the best kind of poem. I like it!

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    Re: Over the years

    Nice one^__^ I like it...
    Carve an amble now,
    Saying that the day's still bright,
    And let's play with time.

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    Re: Over the years

    Like always your poems are really nice, keep it up man.

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    Re: Over the years

    I really liked this one, because I could feel how time passed for you and how things changed. I'm glad they did. Nice poem.
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    Re: Over the years

    a touch too long srry to bust ur bubble.

    thanks to zyta for the sick sig and avy!

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