The Owl

beast · Mar 03, 2009, 07:11 PM

The great horned owl..
A silent threat when it flies,
Wise in the ways of skies.

*Peach_follows* · Mar 22, 2009, 07:24 PM

I just adore really short pieces. It doesn't take much to create solid, and even powerful imagery. You have proven that here.

*Nympho* · Mar 23, 2009, 11:02 AM

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Originally Posted by beast

The great horned owl..
A silent threat when it flies,
Wise in the ways of skies.

Nice Haiku. Use a few stronger words and it'll be marvelous.

Mar 03, 2009, 07:11 PM	#1 (permalink)
beast Devoted Otaku Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: Michigan United States Posts: 1,104 Thanks: 356 Thanked 92 Times in 88 Posts	The Owl The great horned owl.. A silent threat when it flies, Wise in the ways of skies.
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Peach_follows Femmebot Rehab Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Friendly Fridley Posts: 1,439 Thanks: 108 Thanked 128 Times in 110 Posts	Re: The Owl I just adore really short pieces. It doesn't take much to create solid, and even powerful imagery. You have proven that here. __________________ ...You look tired...
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