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    Pain

    Lost love and empty wishes
    that is what i am made of
    lost hopes and empty dreams
    that is what i am

    Pain and sorro
    hurt and hell
    that is where i live

    love and death
    hate and hope
    and total loss
    that is what i have to look forward to

    Pain is every where in my life
    sorrow lerks in every corner
    hate is as much a part of me
    as hell is where i an destand

    my fate is sealed and
    My hope is gone and
    the hate grows
    as love drifts out of site

    what am i to be when pain is my destany
    Moving on Is the hardest Part

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    Re: Pain

    it was a good poem but a little to depressiing if you ask me. But I tend to be on the happy side so I might not be the right audience
    WHATISTHATBIGLONGBUTTONONTHEBOTTOMOFTHEKEYBOREDFOR !?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!

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    Re: Pain

    You have a nice pick of expressing things like this one... Liked it...

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