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    Pain...


    Seems like it was yesterday,
    when i saw your there,
    i was standing infront of your face,
    and you walked away,
    if only i knew then,
    i meant nothing to you...

    I wouldn't have felt this way,
    i wouldn't be in such pain,
    it's like everytime i came,
    you didn't see me there.

    It's like i don't worth anything...

    But when i lied next to you,
    i could swear that i felt,
    that you loved me too,
    i guess it's my mistake,
    blaming you,
    for all the pain,
    i've been going through.
    Now i blame myself,
    for loving you...

    How come i couldn't see,
    that you never loved me,
    but now that i know the truth,
    i still cannot feel complete,
    it's like you took a part of me,
    you took it away with you...

    And now somehow,
    i still love you,
    no purpose, no sense,
    i know you love someone else,
    like i still want this pain,
    like i want this misery,
    it seems that it has become my dearest company...
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    Re: Pain...

    wow!!! a sad poem... yes... it strucked me...
    the emotions are flowing well in that poem.
    keep it up.

    *this poem you made is like a reply to one of my poems*

    Thank you very much,Reese for this wonderful signature ^_^

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    Re: Pain...

    Wow it's a excellent poem you made pretty sad to keep it up.
    Your life means nothing to me.

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    Re: Pain...

    Once again, i really like your poems, they are really deep and pure. Please write more! i would be glad hearing more true feelings.
    I'll be your hope, i'll be your wish, i'll be everything that you need...
    I'm gonna take your soul out of your body-Hikaru&Shia
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    Shia i lovez ya! and ya poems!
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    Re: Pain...

    please pm me, i wanna now something about that poem please ^-^
    thanx
    I'll be your hope, i'll be your wish, i'll be everything that you need...
    I'm gonna take your soul out of your body-Hikaru&Shia
    Wanna know something stupid? i'm watching yaz xD
    Shia i lovez ya! and ya poems!
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    Re: Pain...

    thanx all so much for commenting my poem (:
    it means a lot to me.
    Carpe Diem. Quam minimum credula postero! (:

    Wishing, waiting, dreaming..

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    Re: Pain...

    Quote Originally Posted by °Hikaru° [Kiyoshi! luv u] View Post
    please pm me, i wanna now something about that poem please ^-^
    thanx
    what would you like to know?
    Carpe Diem. Quam minimum credula postero! (:

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    Re: Pain...

    Quote Originally Posted by 'KuRuMi ^.^ [くるみ
    NoiR]what would you like to know?
    Well... it's just that all poems that you have posted are so deep, and make sense.
    everytime i try to write something, it not logic, and i don't even understand myself, it's like reading a bunch of unlogical lines. So, how do you do to write that well, and aren't you afraid that no one will like it, or they won't reply?
    Thank ya!
    I'll be your hope, i'll be your wish, i'll be everything that you need...
    I'm gonna take your soul out of your body-Hikaru&Shia
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