Pain...

KuRuMi ^.^ [くるみ] NoiR · Sep 09, 2006, 11:14 PM

Seems like it was yesterday,
when i saw your there,
i was standing infront of your face,
and you walked away,
if only i knew then,
i meant nothing to you...

I wouldn't have felt this way,
i wouldn't be in such pain,
it's like everytime i came,
you didn't see me there.

It's like i don't worth anything...

But when i lied next to you,
i could swear that i felt,
that you loved me too,
i guess it's my mistake,
blaming you,
for all the pain,
i've been going through.
Now i blame myself,
for loving you...

How come i couldn't see,
that you never loved me,
but now that i know the truth,
i still cannot feel complete,
it's like you took a part of me,
you took it away with you...

And now somehow,
i still love you,
no purpose, no sense,
i know you love someone else,
like i still want this pain,
like i want this misery,
it seems that it has become my dearest company...

raja_psyche · Sep 09, 2006, 11:25 PM

wow!!! a sad poem... yes... it strucked me...
the emotions are flowing well in that poem.
keep it up.

*this poem you made is like a reply to one of my poems*

kenchi18 · Sep 09, 2006, 11:35 PM

Wow it's a excellent poem you made pretty sad to keep it up.

°Hikaru° [Kiyoshi! luv u] · Sep 09, 2006, 11:35 PM

Once again, i really like your poems, they are really deep and pure. Please write more! i would be glad hearing more true feelings.

°Hikaru° [Kiyoshi! luv u] · Sep 09, 2006, 11:50 PM

please pm me, i wanna now something about that poem please ^-^
thanx

KuRuMi ^.^ [くるみ] NoiR · Sep 10, 2006, 12:02 AM

thanx all so much for commenting my poem (:
it means a lot to me.

KuRuMi ^.^ [くるみ] NoiR · Sep 10, 2006, 12:20 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by °Hikaru° [Kiyoshi! luv u]

please pm me, i wanna now something about that poem please ^-^
thanx

what would you like to know?

°Hikaru° [Kiyoshi! luv u] · Sep 10, 2006, 12:34 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by 'KuRuMi ^.^ [くるみ

NoiR]what would you like to know?

Well... it's just that all poems that you have posted are so deep, and make sense.
everytime i try to write something, it not logic, and i don't even understand myself, it's like reading a bunch of unlogical lines. So, how do you do to write that well, and aren't you afraid that no one will like it, or they won't reply?
Thank ya!

KuRuMi ^.^ [くるみ] NoiR · Sep 10, 2006, 12:40 AM

Hmmm... first of all... thanx so much, i'm glad u like my poems (:
So... i simply just write what i feel... & then if it makes sense good, if not, i'll try to fix it.
If it doesn't makes logic to u what u write, probably it's cuz u have to many ideas in ur head.
And yes... it would really suck for me if no one likes my poems, it would suck even more if no one replies.
I hope that i helped u ^-^

°Hikaru° [Kiyoshi! luv u] · Sep 10, 2006, 12:48 AM

yeah you helped me a lotz! thank yaz!

and please keep writing, i will defenitly reply ya poems!

KuRuMi ^.^ [くるみ] NoiR · Sep 10, 2006, 12:49 AM

teehee, thanx so much again! (:

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KuRuMi ^.^ [くるみ] NoiR Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: somewhere in between dreams Posts: 108 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 230	Pain... Seems like it was yesterday, when i saw your there, i was standing infront of your face, and you walked away, if only i knew then, i meant nothing to you... I wouldn't have felt this way, i wouldn't be in such pain, it's like everytime i came, you didn't see me there. It's like i don't worth anything... But when i lied next to you, i could swear that i felt, that you loved me too, i guess it's my mistake, blaming you, for all the pain, i've been going through. Now i blame myself, for loving you... How come i couldn't see, that you never loved me, but now that i know the truth, i still cannot feel complete, it's like you took a part of me, you took it away with you... And now somehow, i still love you, no purpose, no sense, i know you love someone else, like i still want this pain, like i want this misery, it seems that it has become my dearest company... __________________ Carpe Diem. Quam minimum credula postero! (: Wishing, waiting, dreaming.. Last edited by KuRuMi ^.^ [くるみ] NoiR; Sep 09, 2006 at 11:17 PM.
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KuRuMi ^.^ [くるみ] NoiR Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: somewhere in between dreams Posts: 108 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 230	Re: Pain... thanx all so much for commenting my poem (: it means a lot to me. __________________ Carpe Diem. Quam minimum credula postero! (: Wishing, waiting, dreaming..
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KuRuMi ^.^ [くるみ] NoiR Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: somewhere in between dreams Posts: 108 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 230	Re: Pain... Hmmm... first of all... thanx so much, i'm glad u like my poems (: So... i simply just write what i feel... & then if it makes sense good, if not, i'll try to fix it. If it doesn't makes logic to u what u write, probably it's cuz u have to many ideas in ur head. And yes... it would really suck for me if no one likes my poems, it would suck even more if no one replies. I hope that i helped u ^-^ __________________ Carpe Diem. Quam minimum credula postero! (: Wishing, waiting, dreaming..
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°Hikaru° [Kiyoshi! luv u] Newbie Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: somewhere chillazin with KuRuMi ^.^ Posts: 21 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 110	Re: Pain... yeah you helped me a lotz! thank yaz! and please keep writing, i will defenitly reply ya poems! __________________ I'll be your hope, i'll be your wish, i'll be everything that you need... I'm gonna take your soul out of your body-Hikaru&Shia Wanna know something stupid? i'm watching yaz xD Shia i lovez ya! and ya poems! Colorful stylez
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KuRuMi ^.^ [くるみ] NoiR Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: somewhere in between dreams Posts: 108 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 230	Re: Pain... teehee, thanx so much again! (: __________________ Carpe Diem. Quam minimum credula postero! (: Wishing, waiting, dreaming..
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