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    Hmmm... first of all... thanx so much, i'm glad u like my poems (:
    So... i simply just write what i feel... & then if it makes sense good, if not, i'll try to fix it.
    If it doesn't makes logic to u what u write, probably it's cuz u have to many ideas in ur head.
    And yes... it would really suck for me if no one likes my poems, it would suck even more if no one replies.
    I hope that i helped u ^-^
    Carpe Diem. Quam minimum credula postero! (:

    Wishing, waiting, dreaming..

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    Re: Pain...

    yeah you helped me a lotz! thank yaz! and please keep writing, i will defenitly reply ya poems!
    I'll be your hope, i'll be your wish, i'll be everything that you need...
    I'm gonna take your soul out of your body-Hikaru&Shia
    Wanna know something stupid? i'm watching yaz xD
    Shia i lovez ya! and ya poems!
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    teehee, thanx so much again! (:
    Carpe Diem. Quam minimum credula postero! (:

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    Re: Pain...

    Wow! That was a very good poem KuRuMi,I liked it alot.It had such a sad emotion coming from it that I could even feel it.I can relate 2 this alot as well.Awesome job KuRuMi!
    Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^

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    i'm glad you like it, thanx so much ^-^
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    Re: Pain...

    pain this real its hard to live with and to live with outn for some
    to have some you love so dearly to just walk away its wrrong yea but
    it wasnt meant to be. oonce you heart knows this the rest will follow
    but its that first step thats the hardest but it can done with help from
    a friend. i liked htis poem very much and i like how you made it sem hopless
    but it real life it isnt like i said if you have a freind there to help
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Pain...

    So deep, so meaning full, and logical ^_^ It's very sad though but it struck me

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    Re: Pain...

    Awesome poem!!! I really like how you let the reader feel the emotion you put into this! Also I want to say thank you for you post on my poem! I really appreciate that and also I would like to add you to my buddy list if that's okay? Well Great Job and keep'em coming!

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