Pain

I had some things on my mind that were bothering me so I let them out it this one! Not my usual writting but let me know what you think!



PAIN


I tried to impress you with everything I know
But then you slap me down with a devastating blow.
With every look you give like a knife in the back
What do you want from me is this how I’m supposed to act?


You tell me good job but it doesn’t mean a thing
Every word from you is like a rock in a sling.
Hurtling toward me to knock me down
Soon after I fall hearing laughter resound.


So to still succeed with my head held high
Only to soon hear your devastating cry.
Mocking me and picking on me relentlessly
But I let out my aggression silently.


For you see this isn’t the end you had in store for me
Now you saying I’m sorry and graveling at my feet.
I’m not superior to you in any form or way
Just I did what had to be done at the end of the day.


So spare me with endless and continuous flattery
Because now it’s your turn to endure the pain you see.
Let your blood being to rush and you heart being to slow
For the words I just said are like razor blades.


Slitting your wrist nice and slow
You watch the blood pour as you word begin to slow.
For you see the pain and agony
Is the exact same pain you have given me.

wow!!! i just love it! i can feel the pain & the hatred as i read! awesome work. Can't wait for reading more like this. This is just amazing, keep it up!

Thanks NoiR I'll try my best keep more poems like this one keep coming! I just had some things on my mind and I needed a release and this poem was it!

very nice deatiles near the end the way you just put
your feeling's out there not caring anymore was pretty cool's
and my favorite part was
" So spare me with endless and continuous flattery
Because now it’s your turn to endure the pain you see.
Let your blood being to rush and you heart being to slow
For the words I just said are like razor blades."

very cool and thanks for posting also

all i can say is...

woah, that was a great and painful poem!

Thanks HolderofTheDarkChalice(Bro) and Daft I just had to let it out! The pain is real it actually happend yesterday and is still continuing today! So I just let it out with my AO family! I'll try to keep them coming!

This poem is really a PAIN! i can exactly relate to it...Wny don't you join the poetry clan for you to know much better in poem writing? Well,just a suggestion...

I think I will take you up on that suggestion since I just started writing poems! I'm here in Afghanistan just trying my hand at something new, but thanks for the comment Pride_Edward!