Anime Online
Home Forums Gallery Reviews RPG Arcade AO Magazine Links Rules / FAQ

Welcome to AnimeOnline.net, your personal Anime Community!

Anime Online Rulez!



Go Back   Anime Online > Mixed Flava > Poems

Reply
 
LinkBack Thread Tools Display Modes
Old Apr 01, 2007, 06:15 AM   #1 (permalink)
Shichibukai
 
JefferyXie's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jan 2006
Location: Sydney
Posts: 613
Thanks: 0
Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts
JefferyXie may be famous one dayJefferyXie may be famous one day
Credits: 310
Pain

In life there are things that you can avoid
But there is one that you cannot evade
It's name is Pain
It is out there to seek and erase.

Pain is everywhere you go
It hears and sees everything
And it strikes constantly
No matter where you are.

Pain is around when there is war
Pain is around when there is love
Pain is around when there is freedom
Pain is everywhere around us.

Yet despite the troubles that Pain causes
There is something that Pain shows us
The definition of strength
And the definition of character

Yes it is strange to consider Pain
In another light despite what it causes
But yes,a person that is neutral
Will understand its existance.

Now it is time to release Pain from duty
After exploring its many characteristics
But it is not the last time
That you hear the existance of Pain.


yeah..that is it.it is the first poem i have ever written.please enjoy and comment.suggest ways i can improve this..your views will help me.
Status: Offline
 
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!
Reply With Quote
Old Apr 01, 2007, 12:58 PM   #2 (permalink)
104 Highscores
1 )3^^( )N
 
RayMe's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jul 2006
Location: Somewhere i would love to leave right now for somewhere better...
Posts: 3,606
Thanks: 55
Thanked 27 Times in 24 Posts
RayMe is making a name for themselvesRayMe is making a name for themselves
Credits: 59,502
Re: Pain

The existance of pain.. hmm to feel that is the most unwanted feeling...
nice poem ^^
__________________

Legion Ketsueki Lives on~!!
The best ever Lasura~!
>>>myspace<<<
Status: Offline
 
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!
Reply With Quote
Old Apr 01, 2007, 11:40 PM   #3 (permalink)
Diamond in the Rough
 
Lotski's Avatar
 
Join Date: Mar 2007
Location: Baguio City, Philippines
Posts: 150
Thanks: 0
Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts
Lotski is off to a good start
Credits: 358
Re: Pain

nice! the poem you made describes PAIN very well..
if this is your first poem ever, not bad..
you made a good start, so keep it up!
__________________

Be d REASON for someone's happiness, NOT just part of it...
Be a PART of someone's sadness, but NOT d reason for it.
Status: Offline
 
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!
Reply With Quote
Old Apr 02, 2007, 01:51 AM   #4 (permalink)
Elie Jelly
 
elie26's Avatar
 
Join Date: Feb 2006
Location: Hell is an understatement
Posts: 608
Thanks: 0
Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post
elie26 may be famous one dayelie26 may be famous one day
Credits: 2,151
Re: Pain

Nice first poem It took me forever to make an "acceptable" poem xD
This part is so true-

Quote:
Yet despite the troubles that Pain causes
There is something that Pain shows us
The definition of strength
And the definition of character
Pain does show us and make us learn from our mistakes ^^ Hope to read more!
Status: Offline
 
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!
Reply With Quote
Reply

Thread Tools
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off
Trackbacks are On
Pingbacks are On
Refbacks are On


Similar Threads
Thread Thread Starter Forum Replies Last Post
Pain(I couldn't think of anything else) nightmaregirl Poems 4 Mar 04, 2007 02:57 PM
art of pain hellknight Poems 5 Jan 04, 2007 11:45 AM
The Pain Of Her HolderOfTheDarkChalice Poems 10 Nov 16, 2006 05:50 PM
hey its PAIN -painredefined- Introductions 14 May 09, 2006 11:32 PM
Pain Shade/K' Heart The Vault 7 May 12, 2005 05:28 PM


All times are GMT -7. The time now is 08:49 AM.


Manga Fox | Anime Wallpapers | Ringtones | Anime Avatars | Wallpapers | Anime Girls | Watch Anime Online | Anime Buddy Icons
Anime Online Banners by fooligar. ©
This Anime skin cannot be reproduced on any website without written permission from the Anime Online Staff.
Ad Management by RedTyger

SEO by vBSEO

1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36 37 38 39 40 41 42 43 44 45 46 47 48 49 50 51 52 53 54 55 56 57 58 59 60 61 62 63 64 65 66 67 68 69 70 71 72 73 74 75 76 77 78 79 80 81 82 83 84 85 86 87 88 89 90 91 92 93 94 95 96 97 98 99 100 101 102 103 104 105 106 107 108 109 110 111 112 113