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    In life there are things that you can avoid
    But there is one that you cannot evade
    It's name is Pain
    It is out there to seek and erase.

    Pain is everywhere you go
    It hears and sees everything
    And it strikes constantly
    No matter where you are.

    Pain is around when there is war
    Pain is around when there is love
    Pain is around when there is freedom
    Pain is everywhere around us.

    Yet despite the troubles that Pain causes
    There is something that Pain shows us
    The definition of strength
    And the definition of character

    Yes it is strange to consider Pain
    In another light despite what it causes
    But yes,a person that is neutral
    Will understand its existance.

    Now it is time to release Pain from duty
    After exploring its many characteristics
    But it is not the last time
    That you hear the existance of Pain.

    yeah..that is it.it is the first poem i have ever written.please enjoy and comment.suggest ways i can improve this..your views will help me.

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    Re: Pain

    The existance of pain.. hmm to feel that is the most unwanted feeling...
    nice poem ^^

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    nice! the poem you made describes PAIN very well..
    if this is your first poem ever, not bad..
    you made a good start, so keep it up!

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    Re: Pain

    Nice first poem It took me forever to make an "acceptable" poem xD
    This part is so true-

    Yet despite the troubles that Pain causes
    There is something that Pain shows us
    The definition of strength
    And the definition of character
    Pain does show us and make us learn from our mistakes ^^ Hope to read more!

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