Pain

Why am I in so much pain?
What does the world get?
Why does the world revolve around anger?
nothing makes any sence.

Why am I here?
What is my destination?
what i my purpose?
Give me guidence,
Give me hope,
Give me reason,
Give me Happiness.
But most importanly give me direction.

I am lost in the world,
I need a destination.
I need a need a relefe from this pain.
I need help.

I wish you were here to give me these things,
And to help me deal with the pain inside.

this poem is dedicated to my girl
Thank you for carring
I believe!!!

aww...that was sweet and very good...I also think about that everyday, good job :thumb:

Thank you Tora. I appreciate your feedback. I will try to right some more some time and post them here.

you want to know wut i think . . . it sux lol na im jp it is awsome you are verry good better then ill ever be :D: and its sweet that you deticated it to your gf

Thank you Ariel. and I am not all that good you can get better too. i will keep posting then.

have you ever heard the song "pain" by three days grace?thats what this poem reminds me of...great inerpretation ichigo!keep it up.

A sad poem... I like it, it's about how I feel too... "Give me direction".... indeed give me direction! :D:
I enjoyed reading it...And I'm looking forward to the next one...

thank you guys for your imput it really helps me. I appreciate it more than you may think.