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    Dragonrider Ichigo_06 is off to a good start Ichigo_06's Avatar
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    Pain

    Why am I in so much pain?
    What does the world get?
    Why does the world revolve around anger?
    nothing makes any sence.

    Why am I here?
    What is my destination?
    what i my purpose?
    Give me guidence,
    Give me hope,
    Give me reason,
    Give me Happiness.
    But most importanly give me direction.

    I am lost in the world,
    I need a destination.
    I need a need a relefe from this pain.
    I need help.

    I wish you were here to give me these things,
    And to help me deal with the pain inside.


    this poem is dedicated to my girl
    Thank you for carring
    I believe!!!
    ナサン フォオツド
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    Make one person smile for it will continue to spread but if you make a frown that will spread as well.http://www.animeonline.net/gallery/s...0/ppuser/57173

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    Re: Pain

    aww...that was sweet and very good...I also think about that everyday, good job

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    Re: Pain

    Thank you Tora. I appreciate your feedback. I will try to right some more some time and post them here.
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    Re: Pain

    you want to know wut i think . . . it sux lol na im jp it is awsome you are verry good better then ill ever be and its sweet that you deticated it to your gf
    thx anime_800 i love my new sig

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    Thank you Ariel. and I am not all that good you can get better too. i will keep posting then.
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    Re: Pain

    have you ever heard the song "pain" by three days grace?thats what this poem reminds me of...great inerpretation ichigo!keep it up.
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    Re: Pain

    A sad poem... I like it, it's about how I feel too... "Give me direction".... indeed give me direction!
    I enjoyed reading it...And I'm looking forward to the next one...

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: Pain

    thank you guys for your imput it really helps me. I appreciate it more than you may think.
    ナサン フォオツド
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