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Old Jun 01, 2007, 06:01 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Pain

Why am I in so much pain?
What does the world get?
Why does the world revolve around anger?
nothing makes any sence.

Why am I here?
What is my destination?
what i my purpose?
Give me guidence,
Give me hope,
Give me reason,
Give me Happiness.
But most importanly give me direction.

I am lost in the world,
I need a destination.
I need a need a relefe from this pain.
I need help.

I wish you were here to give me these things,
And to help me deal with the pain inside.


this poem is dedicated to my girl
Thank you for carring
I believe!!!
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Old Jun 01, 2007, 06:35 PM   #2 (permalink)
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aww...that was sweet and very good...I also think about that everyday, good job
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Old Jun 01, 2007, 06:55 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Thank you Tora. I appreciate your feedback. I will try to right some more some time and post them here.
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Old Jun 01, 2007, 07:10 PM   #4 (permalink)
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you want to know wut i think . . . it sux lol na im jp it is awsome you are verry good better then ill ever be and its sweet that you deticated it to your gf
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Old Jun 01, 2007, 07:32 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Thank you Ariel. and I am not all that good you can get better too. i will keep posting then.
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Re: Pain

have you ever heard the song "pain" by three days grace?thats what this poem reminds me of...great inerpretation ichigo!keep it up.
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Old Jun 02, 2007, 03:37 AM   #7 (permalink)
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A sad poem... I like it, it's about how I feel too... "Give me direction".... indeed give me direction!
I enjoyed reading it...And I'm looking forward to the next one...
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Old Jun 09, 2007, 08:16 PM   #8 (permalink)
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thank you guys for your imput it really helps me. I appreciate it more than you may think.
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First friendship ; then pain ...oh that's bad but i love this one too...
me too think always where my destination? spichally this Q....
i do not find the answer ...i love iy keep up...
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Nice work i love poems like that i hope you write more i love all poem writters they spend time on people ur a really nice guy keep up the good work
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thank you. I appreciate all your guyses imput whether it is good or bad I will post more when I get more written.
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