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    pain

    i feel pain i feel sorrow my love goes on but i cannot follow
    i try so hard i try so much but pain stays with a mighty thrust
    i always live upon my pain feeling sorrow starts my day
    i dream of happiness i dream of joy but sorrow swallows all my joy
    i try to live i try to love but my pain kicks in and i love no one
    i cry inside for life anew i die each time im torn in two i live for earth and die for none along comes a god who will always bring peace and tranquility

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    Re: pain

    wow baby, that's really good, and sad... that's not about me... right???

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    Re: pain

    no it i snot about you i told you i love writing poems and seeing what people think about them
    i cry inside for life anew i die each time im torn in two i live for earth and die for none along comes a god who will always bring peace and tranquility

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    Re: pain

    ohhhh... ok, it's just sometimes when most people write sad poems, and their in relationships, the other person, might think it's about them.

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    Re: pain

    nice, but it definately isnt about you, or else there'd be humor about your big butt. lol
    fear the reaper

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