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Reply With QuoteNice, it emits pain yet the cause is left a mystery. I like it, keep up the good work.
You have ignored my feelings
You have upset me
Why you done this
Can you see?
You had my trust
But, you burned it in the fire
My mind crush
You called me a liar
Who is there for the blame
Your evil hear is twisted
You destroyed my name
I should have resisted
My faith falling down
Am in fear
Hiding in town
Am no longer here
I ran away
You pushed me
Finding somewhere to stay
I won't have to worry
You made me bleed
Pulled my hair
OUt of my skull
Nobody cared
You were never the same
All you gave me was disaster
My destiny blow's in flame
How much I hated her
I had no chance
I had no place
I never felt
So disgrace
I wanted to kill
Only you
For revenge
But, what did you do?
Nice, it emits pain yet the cause is left a mystery. I like it, keep up the good work.
Thanks for the avatar & sig Rave_Grip you rock!
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Wow! Nice job on writing this Hellknight! Keep up the good work and you are well on you way to becoming a great writer!
hey thanks blue and dragon apprecaite it. am gonna do a love poem next i guess, but i don't know where to start lol
aww that poem is kinda sad yet angry is that what u were feeling at the time ??? but anyway the poems really good ^__^
just saying but ever since me and hellknight became friends he is an angry person lol any way i like it and it was really easy to understand which i liked nice poem manOriginally Posted by equinn
thanks equinn and kid, am gonna call you that kid, sounds better lol
That was a good poem. It was a dark story about how one feels after someone they thought cared about them suddenly turns on them and the revenge that lies in store for that person. Keep up the good work and I look forward to reading your next one.
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