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![]() Hell Enforcer Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Somewhere in SD.
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![]() ![]() Credits: 24,195 | Pain Ambition You have ignored my feelings You have upset me Why you done this Can you see? You had my trust But, you burned it in the fire My mind crush You called me a liar Who is there for the blame Your evil hear is twisted You destroyed my name I should have resisted My faith falling down Am in fear Hiding in town Am no longer here I ran away You pushed me Finding somewhere to stay I won't have to worry You made me bleed Pulled my hair OUt of my skull Nobody cared You were never the same All you gave me was disaster My destiny blow's in flame How much I hated her I had no chance I had no place I never felt So disgrace I wanted to kill Only you For revenge But, what did you do? |
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![]() ![]() Credits: 1,286 | Re: Pain Ambition Wow! Nice job on writing this Hellknight! Keep up the good work and you are well on you way to becoming a great writer!
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![]() Hell Enforcer Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Somewhere in SD.
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![]() ![]() Credits: 24,195 | Re: Pain Ambition hey thanks blue and dragon apprecaite it. am gonna do a love poem next i guess, but i don't know where to start lol |
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![]() ![]() Credits: 19,781 | Re: Pain Ambition aww that poem is kinda sad yet angry is that what u were feeling at the time ??? but anyway the poems really good ^__^
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![]() ![]() Credits: 2,616 | Re: Pain Ambition That was a good poem. It was a dark story about how one feels after someone they thought cared about them suddenly turns on them and the revenge that lies in store for that person. Keep up the good work and I look forward to reading your next one.
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