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    pain and death of a none-existing soul

    My life is black so is my heart or what is left of it,
    but I don't know about my soul,
    I think it's dead from the pain in this life.

    I'm forsaken in this land of death and sin,
    I'm only a sin but I'm waiting for death,
    So i'm going to endure this pain alittle while longer.

    For I am strong enough for this pain,
    But if a greater pain is to come,
    I will fall under its massive pressure.

    For that is my death of my body,
    And now for the pieces of my black heart,
    for they hold every painful memory that I ever had,
    the happy ones are long gone died.

    The love I once had was just the beginning of the many pains to come,
    The last and I hope to god the final pain,
    I'll ever have is the pain of losing a loved one.

    Now I'll just be dead,
    my body,
    my heart,
    and my soul,
    will be gone forever and never will be a whole no more....

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    Re: pain and death of a none-existing soul

    I liked it. Dark but truthful. So telling of a what a weary soul feels like.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: pain and death of a none-existing soul

    A very nice poem indeed ^^..... and it has a good flow too, i think. Good job Forgotten soul

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