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    Re: The Pain Of Her

    aaaaw holder that was sweet, i wanna give you a hug

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    The poem was too long,poems are short actually but even though its very long,the message was clear. Maybe it just needs some certain arrangement...

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    Re: The Pain Of Her

    Quote Originally Posted by Pride_Edward View Post
    The poem was too long,poems are short actually but even though its very long,the message was clear. Maybe it just needs some certain arrangement...
    I didn't think it was too long. I have written longer, have you visited my journal? But anyway, I think poetry is about expressing your feelings and not about sticking to guidlines, so I say, Chris, if you want to write longer, go for it, I'm sure they will be great as well
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    I didn't pick it, but i let it grow
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