Pain(I couldn't think of anything else)

nightmaregirl · Jan 31, 2007, 12:37 AM

I'm happy to say that I am untroubled
Yes maybe theres the odd thing, like the fact that my...
Well never mind..
But all in all I am untroubled

Because, you see,
Sometimes when I am sat alone in my chair,
I wonder, how can I hate my life, when others have it so bad
So I have learned to cope with any misfortunes that come my way

For the past, what, seven minutes,
I have been considering troubledness, and I have come to the conclusion that
A rich girl may suffer as much pain when losing a great deal of money
As a poor farmboy does when all of his livelihood is lost along with his parents

Yes, it seems wrong, but that is the wold now
And it looks as if we all go through the same suffering,
No matter how different we are
No matter the circumstances

There are only a few people I know who I can say tuly suffer
And they are some of the bravest people I know
And whenever I feel like I have it bad,
They remind me that I don't

So I leave you to ponder this:
When you are alone, sobbing into your over priced pillows
Thinking that your life is over
Ask yourself:
Is it?
And your answer may surprise you.

*CherryBlossom18* · Jan 31, 2007, 01:56 AM

That was a very well written poem. It makes you think of how you can sometimes think of hard things can get and how you learn to deal with the hand you're delt. I look forward to reading more.

baikuza · Jan 31, 2007, 02:04 AM

this part is i like most

"For the past, what, seven minutes,
I have been considering troubledness, and I have come to the conclusion that
A rich girl may suffer as much pain when losing a great deal of money
As a poor farmboy does when all of his livelihood is lost along with his parents"

very good!!!! i like it!!! (^ ^)

Nisuu · Jan 31, 2007, 07:04 PM

Your poam is soo awesome! ^_^
And some of the things you expressed in the poam
are some things that have crossed my mind a couple times.

!dark lover · Mar 04, 2007, 02:57 PM

i love you poem it reminds me of a few i write keep it up

Jan 31, 2007, 12:37 AM	#1 (permalink)
nightmaregirl Newbie Join Date: Jan 2007 Posts: 19 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 110	Pain(I couldn't think of anything else) I'm happy to say that I am untroubled Yes maybe theres the odd thing, like the fact that my... Well never mind.. But all in all I am untroubled Because, you see, Sometimes when I am sat alone in my chair, I wonder, how can I hate my life, when others have it so bad So I have learned to cope with any misfortunes that come my way For the past, what, seven minutes, I have been considering troubledness, and I have come to the conclusion that A rich girl may suffer as much pain when losing a great deal of money As a poor farmboy does when all of his livelihood is lost along with his parents Yes, it seems wrong, but that is the wold now And it looks as if we all go through the same suffering, No matter how different we are No matter the circumstances There are only a few people I know who I can say tuly suffer And they are some of the bravest people I know And whenever I feel like I have it bad, They remind me that I don't So I leave you to ponder this: When you are alone, sobbing into your over priced pillows Thinking that your life is over Ask yourself: Is it? And your answer may surprise you. __________________
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CherryBlossom18 Heavy Metal Goddess Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: a place where the stars shine as bright as the sun Posts: 578 Thanks: 1 Thanked 16 Times in 16 Posts Credits: 2,616	Re: Pain(I couldn't think of anything else) That was a very well written poem. It makes you think of how you can sometimes think of hard things can get and how you learn to deal with the hand you're delt. I look forward to reading more. __________________ "Sunset Kisses Along The Beach" Made for me by HolderofTheDarkChalice Thanks so much I love it!
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baikuza Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: should i? Posts: 298 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 110	Re: Pain(I couldn't think of anything else) this part is i like most "For the past, what, seven minutes, I have been considering troubledness, and I have come to the conclusion that A rich girl may suffer as much pain when losing a great deal of money As a poor farmboy does when all of his livelihood is lost along with his parents" very good!!!! i like it!!! (^ ^) __________________ .: Gallery :. .: My Live Space :.
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Nisuu Newbie Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Why do you want to know? Posts: 5 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 110	Re: Pain(I couldn't think of anything else) Your poam is soo awesome! ^_^ And some of the things you expressed in the poam are some things that have crossed my mind a couple times. __________________ Nisuu <3
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!dark lover Banned Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: wasilla alaska Posts: 26 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 186	Re: Pain(I couldn't think of anything else) i love you poem it reminds me of a few i write keep it up
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