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    Pain(I couldn't think of anything else)

    I'm happy to say that I am untroubled
    Yes maybe theres the odd thing, like the fact that my...
    Well never mind..
    But all in all I am untroubled

    Because, you see,
    Sometimes when I am sat alone in my chair,
    I wonder, how can I hate my life, when others have it so bad
    So I have learned to cope with any misfortunes that come my way

    For the past, what, seven minutes,
    I have been considering troubledness, and I have come to the conclusion that
    A rich girl may suffer as much pain when losing a great deal of money
    As a poor farmboy does when all of his livelihood is lost along with his parents

    Yes, it seems wrong, but that is the wold now
    And it looks as if we all go through the same suffering,
    No matter how different we are
    No matter the circumstances

    There are only a few people I know who I can say tuly suffer
    And they are some of the bravest people I know
    And whenever I feel like I have it bad,
    They remind me that I don't

    So I leave you to ponder this:
    When you are alone, sobbing into your over priced pillows
    Thinking that your life is over
    Ask yourself:
    Is it?
    And your answer may surprise you.

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    Re: Pain(I couldn't think of anything else)

    That was a very well written poem. It makes you think of how you can sometimes think of hard things can get and how you learn to deal with the hand you're delt. I look forward to reading more.
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    Re: Pain(I couldn't think of anything else)

    this part is i like most

    "For the past, what, seven minutes,
    I have been considering troubledness, and I have come to the conclusion that
    A rich girl may suffer as much pain when losing a great deal of money
    As a poor farmboy does when all of his livelihood is lost along with his parents"

    very good!!!! i like it!!! (^ ^)

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    Re: Pain(I couldn't think of anything else)

    Your poam is soo awesome! ^_^
    And some of the things you expressed in the poam
    are some things that have crossed my mind a couple times.
    Nisuu
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    Re: Pain(I couldn't think of anything else)

    i love you poem it reminds me of a few i write keep it up

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