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    the pain of loneless

    I walk around felling hopeless wondering if any one will reconize my exzistance. the pain i fell is one of infinte loneless and sorrow. wondering what it feels like to have some one there. what if feels like not beeing used.
    wondering what this world has to offer other the pain,regret,sandess and sorrow wondering the world loney forever more


    i know its bad but i just have to say what i feel right thanks for the rant time

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    Re: the pain of loneless

    lol, it was kinda short but believe it or not I liked it. Everyone feels lonely at times and I thought this was a good poem to put it into context.

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    Re: the pain of loneless

    I love this poem ^^
    its awesome..
    you sould make more like it
    ‘Cause I’m broken when I’m open
    And I don’t feel like I am strong enough
    ‘Cause I’m broken when I’m lonesome
    And I don’t feel light when you’re gone away

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