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    The pain of loss

    The pain of loss

    I look at you as you stand in the light
    your glassy eyes void of emotion-Blank
    My heart drops to hte bottom of the deep sea
    As you fall on the cold floor.

    One blink of an eye and your gone.
    Nothing can be done
    As your soul is slowly drained away
    And you fall into utter darkness.

    I remember how life was-before you came
    I was nothing just born to die
    You were my joy and happiness-my true meaning of life
    But now you lost you'r reasons to listen to my words
    Your smile of love became the look of sadness
    Your now puppet standing in fornt of the gate to death

    In the utter silence, a voice is heard
    A voice of love that cries in sadness
    "Hold my hand and tell me you'll be mine
    Through laughter, through tears
    Then let the whole world see our love will be evergreen
    through out the years."

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    Re: The pain of loss

    expressing death can be hard but you really did well here and explaining how
    you was nothing till he was there is very true in life for most and it really means
    alot to know that you detailed your sorrow very nice and depressing love it
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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