expressing death can be hard but you really did well here and explaining how
you was nothing till he was there is very true in life for most and it really means
alot to know that you detailed your sorrow very nice and depressing love it
The pain of loss
I look at you as you stand in the light
your glassy eyes void of emotion-Blank
My heart drops to hte bottom of the deep sea
As you fall on the cold floor.
One blink of an eye and your gone.
Nothing can be done
As your soul is slowly drained away
And you fall into utter darkness.
I remember how life was-before you came
I was nothing just born to die
You were my joy and happiness-my true meaning of life
But now you lost you'r reasons to listen to my words
Your smile of love became the look of sadness
Your now puppet standing in fornt of the gate to death
In the utter silence, a voice is heard
A voice of love that cries in sadness
"Hold my hand and tell me you'll be mine
Through laughter, through tears
Then let the whole world see our love will be evergreen
through out the years."
My second poem
Last edited by creamsilver; Jul 27, 2006 at 09:40 AM.
If you try and fly to your goal you will only fall from the starry sky
expressing death can be hard but you really did well here and explaining how
you was nothing till he was there is very true in life for most and it really means
alot to know that you detailed your sorrow very nice and depressing love it
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
Isolate and save you from yourself
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