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    Pain resemblence?

    I can feel this pain
    Almost everyday
    It's inside my brain
    I want it to go away

    The pain is inside
    It won't stop
    I think it want's me dead
    Or the day I drop

    It leave's me starving
    Only to death
    It only wants
    My last breath.

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    Re: Pain resemblence?

    kool poem kinda short but kool
    Fav line:
    I can feel this pain
    Almost everyday
    Don't tell me the sky is the limit, when there are footprints on the moon


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    Re: Pain resemblence?

    Short and sweet... It's dark too, which means I'm in love. JK I like it. It's actually similar to poems I've written before. Nicely Written! Keep it up

    My favorite lines are:

    It only wants
    My last breath.

    Come dance in the rain with me, no one is watching.

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    Re: Pain resemblence?

    lol, thanks LBF,and DS, am making more as we speak so pretty much both of them won't have a meaning.

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