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Old Feb 09, 2007, 09:42 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Pain resemblence?

I can feel this pain
Almost everyday
It's inside my brain
I want it to go away

The pain is inside
It won't stop
I think it want's me dead
Or the day I drop

It leave's me starving
Only to death
It only wants
My last breath.
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Old Feb 09, 2007, 09:52 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Re: Pain resemblence?

kool poem kinda short but kool
Fav line:
I can feel this pain
Almost everyday
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Old Feb 09, 2007, 10:41 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Re: Pain resemblence?

Short and sweet... It's dark too, which means I'm in love. JK I like it. It's actually similar to poems I've written before. Nicely Written! Keep it up

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Old Feb 09, 2007, 11:08 AM   #4 (permalink)
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lol, thanks LBF,and DS, am making more as we speak so pretty much both of them won't have a meaning.
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