Pain resemblence?

*hellknight* · Feb 09, 2007, 09:42 AM

I can feel this pain
Almost everyday
It's inside my brain
I want it to go away

The pain is inside
It won't stop
I think it want's me dead
Or the day I drop

It leave's me starving
Only to death
It only wants
My last breath.

LostbutFound · Feb 09, 2007, 09:52 AM

kool poem kinda short but kool
Fav line:I can feel this pain
Almost everyday

Darkened_Star · Feb 09, 2007, 10:41 AM

Short and sweet... It's dark too, which means I'm in love. JK I like it. It's actually similar to poems I've written before. Nicely Written! Keep it up

My favorite lines are:

Quote:

It only wants
My last breath.

*hellknight* · Feb 09, 2007, 11:08 AM

lol, thanks LBF,and DS, am making more as we speak so pretty much both of them won't have a meaning.

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hellknight Hell Enforcer Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: South dakota, Native American Posts: 1,442 Thanks: 2 Thanked 6 Times in 6 Posts Credits: 15,340	Pain resemblence? I can feel this pain Almost everyday It's inside my brain I want it to go away The pain is inside It won't stop I think it want's me dead Or the day I drop It leave's me starving Only to death It only wants My last breath.
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LostbutFound Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Behind you ...........boo Posts: 294 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 814	Re: Pain resemblence? kool poem kinda short but kool Fav line:I can feel this pain Almost everyday __________________ Ok in order to judge other you first have to be able to judge yourself, then we must all except each others as equals
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hellknight Hell Enforcer Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: South dakota, Native American Posts: 1,442 Thanks: 2 Thanked 6 Times in 6 Posts Credits: 15,340	Re: Pain resemblence? lol, thanks LBF,and DS, am making more as we speak so pretty much both of them won't have a meaning.
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