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    Pain-Sinful Pleasure...

    Pain-My Sinful Pleasure...

    I hurt so bad, My insides ache
    My head is throbing, Heart is pounding
    Blood is burning, Pulse is raceing
    Something is very wrong with me, Why do I feel this way...

    "Why am I burning on the inside"

    I can't hear, All I hear are mumbles
    I can't see, It's all blurry
    I can't speak, No sound will come
    I can't feel, My fingers are numb...

    "I want to tear off my skin"

    Surround by darkness, I see no light
    I just want to end it all, But is there some hope
    Left alone, No one to hold
    Falling to pieces, Breaking apart...

    "I don't want to break"

    I hold a heart, Full of cracks
    Taped together, Trying to hold it's self in place
    Wire wraped tightly around my wrists, Blood leaking out slowly
    Bandages around my neck, Underneath you will find fingerprints...

    "Trying to hold on a little longer"

    Chained to the floor, Looking into cold and unforgiving eyes
    I scream when you slap me across the face, I can finally feel something
    The sting of the pain and the blood within my mouth, I can feel these
    I cry silently as you wrap your hands around my neck again, As you bruise me and kiss it all away...

    "Pain is all I can feel"

    I know I can never be forgivin, For this is a sin
    I've commeted so many, Never will I be allowed through heaven's doors
    As you tear at my cloths, I just lay and let you have your way
    I cry out when you bite down on my neck, I can't help but to moan...

    "This pleasure is my sin"

    I hurt so bad, My insides ache...i'm in pain
    My head is throbing, Heart is pounding...can't stop them
    Blood is burning, Pulse is raceing...why won't this stop
    Something is very wrong with me, Why do I feel this way...why do I feel so hollow...

    "Why am I burning on the inside, Why can't I cool down"

    I can't hear, All I hear are mumbles...what are you saying
    I can't see, It's all blurry...what are you doing
    I can't speak, No sound will come...won't you let me call out your name
    I can't feel, My fingers are numb...my whole body has gone cold...

    "I want to tear off my skin, I hate not being able to feel you"

    Break me, Taint me
    Paint me with my own blood, Make me your masterpiece
    Chain me to your bed, So I can never escape
    Make me beg for mercy, Force me into submission...


    "Mold me into what you want...
    Make me scream your name to the heavens...
    Force me to never say no to you...
    Show me that I only belong to you...
    Leave your mark around my neck...
    Let them all see....who I belong to...
    You have given me my painful pleasure...
    I am now your Sin....."




    These are my newest lyrics that I wrote. Yes thery are very..."Dark". I was in the mood so I couldn't help myself. It's been a long time since I last wrote something like this, but i'm really glad with it's out come. There were 2 songs that inspired and helped me write this. The 1st was "Falling Inside The Black" by Skillet. And the 2nd was "Final Destination" by Within Temptation. These are 2 of my fav songs and bands. If you haven't heard of them then I recomand that you listen 2 them. Well enjoy and please comment, love 2 know what others think of this. lol ^__^
    Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^

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    Re: Pain-Sinful Pleasure...

    Very good job sis! I found it very scary. It seemed like Dracula was bitting the neck of his latest victim and draining the blood from her! I can't wait to read your next one.
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    Re: Pain-Sinful Pleasure...

    Quote Originally Posted by Shinigami's_Angel View Post
    Surround by darkness, I see no light
    I just want to end it all, But is there some hope
    Left alone, No one to hold
    Falling to pieces, Breaking apart...

    "I don't want to break"


    "Mold me into what you want...
    Make me scream your name to the heavens...
    Force me to never say no to you...
    Show me that I only belong to you...
    Leave your mark around my neck...
    Let them all see....who I belong to...
    You have given me my painful pleasure...
    I am now your Sin....."
    I love these two stanzas. The first one because I feel the sameway, and you word it very nicely. The second, well because that is a stanza that most strongwilled people want in oneway or another. Over all I like the darkness in this poem, it was very well written. I'll like to see more of these from you. Great job.

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