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    Pain of the world

    Pain of the world

    When it rains,
    feel the world's pain.
    The skies are crying,
    while you are hurting, tormenting and destroying it.

    The thick black mists,
    the colourful poison poists.
    Killing the seas,
    and the plants until not even peas are left.

    I sook for sanctuaries,
    but found mines and quaries instead.
    Drilling deep into the soil,
    until the earth is spoiled.

    The ices in the artic withers away,
    soon we will drown and pay.
    It gets hotter everyday,
    and all u can do is wait and lay down.

    or...
    You may start to be caring,
    for the world is willing to give back.
    Repair it! Mend it! Heal it!
    Take it out from the sucking hellish pit.

    We have the power to choose,
    and we don't want to lose.
    Do what is right,
    though you must put in all your might.

    Hear the voices of those who care.
    Heed to it for they are aware.
    Give them a hand,
    and save this land.

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    Re: Pain of the world

    Wow.... That a really really good poem Ray... It reminds me of this "Global Warm-up" (can't really remember what it's called) and what's happening to the earth, if it's true that is...

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    Re: Pain of the world

    ooo kinda globle warming here ^^ awsome poem ray ^^

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    Re: Pain of the world

    Hmm having a hard time putting all the pollution into one...so i thought i make it simple
    and put the one which is very common now... ^^ and a few others which might explain it whole.. xD

    Thx alucard for reading ^^

    and ty for saying it's awesome..my second rhyming poem~! xD

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    Re: Pain of the world

    wow this is a great poem i love reading all of your keep it up!

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    Re: Pain of the world

    I wonder if i did the rhyming right... :/ im still new with it @.@

    thx ^^ i appreciate ur comments my friend ^^ and sure i will do so

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    Re: Pain of the world

    i love your ending to the poem^^

    Hear the voices of those who care.
    Heed to it for they are aware.
    Give them a hand,
    and save this land.

    the whole poem was beautifully written^^
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    Re: Pain of the world

    It's a great poem and it speaks the truth... The world is falling apart around us and it's being torn apart right before our eyes and were the one's doing it. We sit here and say to recycle and things like that but because of our laziness we don't keep at it and we can see what it's doing to our world.. if we really don't want to let it die we would take better care of it....

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