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    Re: The pain you caused me

    Ky-chan I am so sorry for what you had to endure. But the past is meant to stay in the past. I hope you get over it, ky-chan. And let it rest in peace.

    And I hope the ****** burns in hell.

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    I know I hope so to but unfortunately my past haunts me every day.
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    Mines does too, ky-chan. Trust me sis, I know what you mean. And I feel for you. It must have been horrible going through such terrible times. But things happen... sometimes to better us. Sometimes for unknown purposes. You needed to let it out, and you did so through this poem. It was a great poem, ky-chan. And don't you forget.. just as you are here for me... I am always here for you.

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    Thank you that makes me feel happy knowing someones here for me. Thank you Wolf-chan
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    Wow KY, that is intresting... have you stoped taking medications? JK, I like the deepness of the poem but it is a bit long. You might want to brake it up next time.


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    Re: The pain you caused me

    Quote Originally Posted by Kasai View Post
    Wow. The lack of punctuation ruined the flow. I couldnt get pass the first two lines.
    Punctuation?!?!?!?! Im rather disgusted at how everyone treated this as if it were ~just~ a poem. THIS IS SOMEONES LIFE!!!!!!!

    My heart goes out to you hon. This poem left me in tears. If you ever need someone to talk to... PM me, I will listen to whatever else you may need to let out. I know alot about pain.

    Keep your head up.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: The pain you caused me

    Mattness how can you break up a poem about my life? Tell me that...I was never on medication never been to a counselor about it nothing of the sorts.

    Peach_follows thank you for you support. I appreciate your words of kindness.
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    Re: The pain you caused me

    Quote Originally Posted by Peach_follows View Post
    Punctuation?!?!?!?! Im rather disgusted at how everyone treated this as if it were ~just~ a poem. THIS IS SOMEONES LIFE!!!!!!!
    Poetry is written expression. And the english language, what this poem is written in, has rules. I expect to see the practical and everyday rules that apply to the english language used when I read something. Whether or not the poet chooses to write about fruit or their life? Means nothing to me.
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