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    The pain you have caused

    What is it with you,
    Your confused although you say you know.
    You think your hurt, HA! That is nothing!
    You have torn my heart, I let you in.

    You sit there and say that I dont care,
    Well fine I won't, no more I dont care!
    Happy, is that what you want to here?
    Well I have said it and I can say it more.

    I let you into my heart and say your always there,
    That wasn't a lie, but yet you call me a lier,
    You fuss and moan, always about yourself,
    I tried to keep this lost hope of a friendship,

    But as always it has blown up in my face,
    That pain you feel is nothing to what you have just put me through.
    It's over and done, I give up and I'm gone!
    The old friendship we had is no more.

    I am not a quiter but yet I am giving up,
    I dont want to but all you can think about is jelousy.
    Why didn't I say it sooner? you ask?
    Well it is because you were not ready.

    You once said, "I will always be there!" and now your not.
    Just because I have her and not you, jelousy has no room
    In friendship of anykind so, I give you one of two options,
    Loose your jelousy or loose my friendship!

    The choice is yours and yours alone, I am not going to force anything.
    Now I leave it in your hands, to pick up where you left off, or to drop the friendship.
    I hate to see you go, it pains me more to think about it, but what else can I do?
    There is nothing else I can do but just wait for your choice, but it must be what YOU want.

    I know you want to be friends, but yet your jelousy doesnt.
    The choice is yours, no one elses, not mine, or his, or hers.
    YOU make the choice and be damn sure it is what you want.
    Make sure you think about what your doing and not what you want.

    You call me selfish, you call me rude, you call me a jerk,
    And yet I am still trying to keep the friendship together,
    How in anyones right mind do those fit together?
    Ask yourself, "Do I want him happy or do I want him sad,"

    "Do I care, or do I stare as he walks out?"
    Because depending on your choice, I will do just that.
    I told you I was there always, your always in my thoughts,
    This is true for all my friends, not just you or her or him.

    Make your choice, make it fast, but be warned,
    If it is the one of jelousy over friendship, I will be gone forever.
    Never to return, always an empty whole, you said your glad I am happy,
    and yet your not because of jelousy.

    As long as that is there friendship will not be.
    When you decide to give jelousy up, tell me,
    I will be ready to have your friendship back.
    I hate to do this but I have no choice,

    You force me to extreme and yet you dont wince a bit
    However I feel twice what I should, and yet still your resistant.
    You said you'ed never leave, but yet in a way you have.
    You've changed since then and so have I. So make your coice and make it wise.

    Here guys sorry it is so depressing but I had to get it out of my mind so I can get over it. Please tell me what you think. Thanks to my true friends, if it werent for you I would have given up a long time ago. Thanks again and I hope you like it.
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    Re: The pain you have caused

    OH my GOODNESS that was amazing!!! what a powerful display of emotions.
    Ilove it
    You let out your anger and pain in such a poetic way.
    Reality in speaking its really hard to choose between a friend and a spouse. It fells like your heart is being ripped apart because u love all yor friends, but there has to be an insecure one who thinks that your love is not enough. ITS RATHER SADDENING!
    bUT I TOTALLY LOVE YOUR POEM

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    Re: The pain you have caused

    Why thank you and I see what you mean about the rather saddening comment, when I just re-read it I was almost in tears. (That is bad) Anyways, thank you for your comments and sorry it was so sad and angry, but like I said I had to get it off my chest.
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    Re: The pain you have caused

    OH! MY! I'm teering up. *Wipes face* That is sad, I love it to death though. Where do you get the time to do this? I don't know much about poetry but, this one was great, A wide range of emotions, from where you are going to go, to where you are now. I cant put this into words. Keep up the good work Ichigo! hope you go far!
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    Thank you highteckdudu I am glad you like it, altough I know what you are saying when you said it is said, it is for me when I re-read the darn thing, hum actually I had this thought in mind since yesterday, but last night I typed it up. sorry about the length though.
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    Re: The pain you have caused

    I.... i don't know what to say so... ...... it's full of emotions and it flat out says what you want. Good job and keep it up.

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    Thank you AngelicDemon. I am glad you guys like it. (it is bad when the auther tears up on his own work) well I will make the next one happy promiss.
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    Re: The pain you have caused

    my man ichigo you've got a way with touching the heart* takes breathe* its so emotional

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