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    Re: The pain you have caused

    It means something when the Authors cries over their work. It means that the work means something important to them.

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    Re: The pain you have caused

    I like this poem! I've been in your shoes before--y'think we wear the same size? LOL!

    On a serious note, I like your release of emotion through your writing. It's almost as if I'm watching you release negative chi through your writing--which is good for the mind. Everybody in life has that one person who they'd love to keep a friendship with for as long as possible. Unfortunately, new people come in to play and feelings become crushed withouth that person even knowing until it's either too late or it wasn't too late, but didn't act until the last minute.

    It's hard dealin' with stuff like that, but no matter what path the other chooses, always remember the good that came out of what you had. ^_^

    Sorry, I'm rambling. This is good work right here! Keep it up, Ichigo!


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    Thanks you guys sorry againit was so saI like this poem! I've been in your shoes before--y'think we wear the same size? LOL!
    [QUOTE]On a serious note, I like your release of emotion through your writing. It's almost as if I'm watching you release negative chi through your writing--which is good for the mind. Everybody in life has that one person who they'd love to keep a friendship with for as long as possible. Unfortunately, new people come in to play and feelings become crushed withouth that person even knowing until it's either too late or it wasn't too late, but didn't act until the last minute.

    It's hard dealin' with stuff like that, but no matter what path the other chooses, always remember the good that came out of what you had. ^_^

    Sorry, I'm rambling. This is good work right here! Keep it up, Ichigo!d but I had to let it out of the box.[\QUOTE]
    thanks sprout and that is alright I needed that anyways, it is alright, but yeah I ether put that "negative chi" to work or just write it out. Thanks again everyone.
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    Re: The pain you have caused

    Well the length is no problem, how ever long you need it to be to let your feelings out.
    I tryed to see things from your point of view but i cant seem to get my head that far up my ass!
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    oh alright, hum although I am surprised you guys havent said anything about the spelling.
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    I dont like to nag, And yes you have spelling mistakes, your last one did too, dont you have spell check or is it supposed to be like that?
    I tryed to see things from your point of view but i cant seem to get my head that far up my ass!
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    Re: The pain you have caused

    now i understand and i am sorry
    that your hurt and
    your word are powerful they say alot.
    buy keep the good work ok and hope cheer up soon okay.

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    Alright and thanks chrystalann and highteckdudu I am sure I do but I got lazy
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