I like this poem! I've been in your shoes before--y'think we wear the same size? LOL!
On a serious note, I like your release of emotion through your writing. It's almost as if I'm watching you release negative chi through your writing--which is good for the mind. Everybody in life has that one person who they'd love to keep a friendship with for as long as possible. Unfortunately, new people come in to play and feelings become crushed withouth that person even knowing until it's either too late or it wasn't too late, but didn't act until the last minute.
It's hard dealin' with stuff like that, but no matter what path the other chooses, always remember the good that came out of what you had. ^_^
Sorry, I'm rambling. This is good work right here! Keep it up, Ichigo!