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    Otaku Bowling Champion Tifa Lockhart is off to a good start
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    Re: The pain you have caused

    Wow, a deep poem indeed. Putting your feelings into the poem is sometimes a good thing but watch out for some repetition on some ideas. Overall, I really like your poem. Keep up the awesome work. =D

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    Re: The pain you have caused

    Layz! I was jokeing and messing around, i spell things wrong too some times! just keep up the good work your doing better than me!
    I tryed to see things from your point of view but i cant seem to get my head that far up my ass!
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    thanks to both of tou (tifa and highteckdudu) I apprciate when my work is appreciated, and liked, and I will keep it up.
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    Re: The pain you have caused

    long and sad poem you got there Ichigo^^ but it's a very good one too
    i cried when i was reading it*wipes away my tears away*
    anyway nice done and keep up the good work

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    Re: The pain you have caused

    Thank you alex, I am glad you like it despite the sadness.
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    Re: The pain you have caused

    just may you can publish your you have great deal of
    comment on all of your work
    and many there will like them as well .
    u have one hell of nack for writing

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    Thanks Chrystalann but post where? anyways I am glad you liked it.
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    Re: The pain you have caused

    your very welcome
    hope that you will post real soon
    cant wait to the next one

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