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    Re: The pain you have caused

    alright I will let you know. all of you keep an eye on my profile I will say it in there.
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    Re: The pain you have caused

    *sigh*... I could see a bit of wrong spellings and- whatever... Anyway *blink blink*, I think you've done a great job in this poem *nod nod*. Wow... That must've been a hit. I hope your trials will be over and I hope by faith your friendship with that friend of yours will not perish that easily. That friend of yours... Must be close to you. So sad to experience this kind of situation. Well, I think I spill out too much already *chuckles* ... Once again, great work -PEACE!-
    Carve an amble now,
    Saying that the day's still bright,
    And let's play with time.

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    Re: The pain you have caused

    His friendship will never end because neither of them, i think, will let it. ^-^ Once again. good job. seems like a lot of people like this poem. Congrats.

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    Re: The pain you have caused

    Nice poem, you put alot of your heart and soul into this one. You can feel all the emotion in it. Good job. Also, a true friend would never do that to a friend reguardless how they felt towards them. They would always want that friend to be happy no matter what happens. Ofcourse, those are just my thoughts on the matter. lol

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    Re: The pain you have caused

    wow nice poem. im guessing that whe you wrote this poem, you just went throught the same stuff. reading it, it brought back alot of bad memories about past loves. i rele liked the flow and the mood that you popped into the poem. nice lenght and your ideas werent clouded in vague language. it was straight to the point, but not too dumb-ed down. nice poem ichigo, keep the writing skill alive.

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    Re: The pain you have caused

    Thank you everyone, I am glad you all liked this one, thanks again and I will do just that, Raimann. Thanks again!
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    Re: The pain you have caused

    very nice.It had a deep meaning.I was moved by the emoson in the pome.

    Thankx Highteckdudu

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    Re: The pain you have caused

    Thank you Naruto_4893 I am glad you liked it. (means alot)
    ナサン フォオツド
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