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    Re: The pain you have caused

    well then the one after that, we were just giving a suggestion. A way to help you, well i was i dont know about him?
    I tryed to see things from your point of view but i cant seem to get my head that far up my ass!
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    Re: The pain you have caused

    yeah really? I wil lsee but I like happy poems. they are soothing for me and they mean alot as well as the sad ones to write one this good again I have to be really mad or pissed one of the two.
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    yeah every one has their diffrent style~ like mine i dont use my self in any of them, but oh well! I like that poems are a way for you to feel soothed! keep up the good work!
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    Re: The pain you have caused

    Woah...that's intense. It's really amazing and powerful. Great job.

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    thanks impure_soul I am glad you liked it, for some reason they come out better then the other ones.
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    Re: The pain you have caused

    awww such a sad emotanal poem ...and it was LONG lol but its a awsome poem i hope this isnt about u ether ..... if so it will be ok she wasnt at all worth it

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    Re: The pain you have caused

    I really liked it. It made me think of my friends, about how they always seem to have troubles with love. Beautifully written. Unfortunately, I'm picky on spelling and grammar, but it was nice. So much emotion just pouring off it, you are pretty talented.

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    Re: The pain you have caused

    Thank you Eqquin, and unfortunately it was about me and a friend sorry about the length though. and thank you bloodlust I am glad you you liked it.
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