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Jun 01, 2007, 02:33 PM
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  ~The Mistress~  Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Hell
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 Credits: 12,532 | Painful Pleasure Nothing good is free We both know that That is you and me You can't find pleasure without pain You can't always see sunshine Sometimes you must see rain Life is a mix of good and bad There's nothing we can do to change this We both want to live When we chose to love We knew we were choosing a double bladed sword One produces undeniable joy and the highest of all pleasures The other produces undescribable pain that will never heal But we chose that We know that But we still chose to be together Our diffrences make us stronger The heat of persecution makes our love hotter I will admit that it was hard to deal with the pain At first But now its merely a dull ache No longer hindering us from joy I'm glad we chose to exchange what we had For I wouldn't ever replace this painful pleasure 
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Jun 01, 2007, 03:05 PM
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Credits: 49,619 | Re: Painful Pleasrure I love this poem!!! It's just great... and so true... just my thoughts about love and pain and life at all... the good things in life would never be that good without the bad things... I enjoyed reading this soooo much and I couldn't find anything bad in it... such a great work!!!! |
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Jun 01, 2007, 05:22 PM
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Credits: 310 | Re: Painful Pleasure this poem is a really good way to explain love..so real,so down to earth.great!keep it up.
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Jun 01, 2007, 07:04 PM
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| Shichibukai  | Re: Painful Pleasure It is hard to comment on poems like this because there are lots of poems out there that is associated with love.BUt i have to say that i enjoyed reading it because of the mixture of the language and the emotion.THat is the kind of stuff that is good poetry.Keep up the effort. |
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Jun 03, 2007, 06:25 AM
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| ~The Master~  Join Date: May 2005 Location: Massachusetts
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Credits: 18,874 | Re: Painful Pleasure I love it ! Every thing is so true about every thing in life isent free and there will always be some thing that hurts you but you get thru it and it gets better from there.I really liked reading it great work.
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Jun 03, 2007, 09:51 AM
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| ♡♥I love you Kyle Kun!♥♡  Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: In my lovers heart
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Credits: 13,226 | Re: Painful Pleasure Your poem was simply amazing reading!! It tells a lot in the poem and how strong your love is and more thats what makes it amazing!!!!!!!!!! I hope to see more!!! 
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Jun 04, 2007, 01:25 PM
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| 1 )3^^( )N  Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Somewhere i would love to leave right now for somewhere better...
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Credits: 59,502 | Re: Painful Pleasure woah...a masterpiece...~! ^^ everything in it is so true.... sigh... this remind me of the song by John Legend, ordinary people... |
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Jun 06, 2007, 12:05 AM
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 Diamond in the Rough  Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: himitsu.....
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Credits: 258 | Re: Painful Pleasure the title suits the poem very well. i like the way you chose your words - they're simple yet very expressive. and so, i think the poem's really great. 
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