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Old Jun 01, 2007, 02:33 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Painful Pleasure

Nothing good is free
We both know that
That is you and me

You can't find pleasure without pain
You can't always see sunshine
Sometimes you must see rain

Life is a mix of good and bad
There's nothing we can do to change this
We both want to live

When we chose to love
We knew we were choosing a double bladed sword

One produces undeniable joy and the highest of all pleasures
The other produces undescribable pain that will never heal
But we chose that
We know that

But we still chose to be together
Our diffrences make us stronger
The heat of persecution makes our love hotter

I will admit that it was hard to deal with the pain
At first
But now its merely a dull ache
No longer hindering us from joy

I'm glad we chose to exchange what we had
For I wouldn't ever replace this painful pleasure

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Old Jun 01, 2007, 03:05 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Re: Painful Pleasrure

I love this poem!!! It's just great... and so true... just my thoughts about love and pain and life at all... the good things in life would never be that good without the bad things...
I enjoyed reading this soooo much and I couldn't find anything bad in it... such a great work!!!!
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Old Jun 01, 2007, 05:22 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Re: Painful Pleasure

this poem is a really good way to explain love..so real,so down to earth.great!keep it up.
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Old Jun 01, 2007, 07:04 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Re: Painful Pleasure

It is hard to comment on poems like this because there are lots of poems out there that is associated with love.BUt i have to say that i enjoyed reading it because of the mixture of the language and the emotion.THat is the kind of stuff that is good poetry.Keep up the effort.
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Old Jun 03, 2007, 06:25 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Re: Painful Pleasure

I love it !
Every thing is so true about every thing in life isent free and there will always be some thing that hurts you but you get thru it and it gets better from there.I really liked reading it great work.
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Old Jun 03, 2007, 06:30 AM   #6 (permalink)
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Re: Painful Pleasure

only 2 words i can say for this

"hard" and "strong"

very good. hope a nice time for you. (^_^)
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Old Jun 03, 2007, 09:51 AM   #7 (permalink)
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Re: Painful Pleasure

Your poem was simply amazing reading!! It tells a lot in the poem and how strong your love is and more thats what makes it amazing!!!!!!!!!! I hope to see more!!!
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woah...a masterpiece...~! ^^ everything in it is so true.... sigh... this remind me of the song by John Legend, ordinary people...
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Re: Painful Pleasure

the title suits the poem very well. i like the way you chose your words - they're simple yet very expressive. and so, i think the poem's really great.
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