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    Painful Pleasure

    Nothing good is free
    We both know that
    That is you and me

    You can't find pleasure without pain
    You can't always see sunshine
    Sometimes you must see rain

    Life is a mix of good and bad
    There's nothing we can do to change this
    We both want to live

    When we chose to love
    We knew we were choosing a double bladed sword

    One produces undeniable joy and the highest of all pleasures
    The other produces undescribable pain that will never heal
    But we chose that
    We know that

    But we still chose to be together
    Our diffrences make us stronger
    The heat of persecution makes our love hotter

    I will admit that it was hard to deal with the pain
    At first
    But now its merely a dull ache
    No longer hindering us from joy

    I'm glad we chose to exchange what we had
    For I wouldn't ever replace this painful pleasure


    Our love will go on until the end of time. I will always be yours and you will be mine.

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    Re: Painful Pleasrure

    I love this poem!!! It's just great... and so true... just my thoughts about love and pain and life at all... the good things in life would never be that good without the bad things...
    I enjoyed reading this soooo much and I couldn't find anything bad in it... such a great work!!!!

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    Re: Painful Pleasure

    this poem is a really good way to explain love..so real,so down to earth.great!keep it up.
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    Re: Painful Pleasure

    It is hard to comment on poems like this because there are lots of poems out there that is associated with love.BUt i have to say that i enjoyed reading it because of the mixture of the language and the emotion.THat is the kind of stuff that is good poetry.Keep up the effort.

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    Re: Painful Pleasure

    I love it !
    Every thing is so true about every thing in life isent free and there will always be some thing that hurts you but you get thru it and it gets better from there.I really liked reading it great work.
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    Re: Painful Pleasure

    only 2 words i can say for this

    "hard" and "strong"

    very good. hope a nice time for you. (^_^)

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    Re: Painful Pleasure

    Your poem was simply amazing reading!! It tells a lot in the poem and how strong your love is and more thats what makes it amazing!!!!!!!!!! I hope to see more!!!
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    Re: Painful Pleasure

    woah...a masterpiece...~! ^^ everything in it is so true.... sigh... this remind me of the song by John Legend, ordinary people...

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