Pains of the world

chrystalann2004 · Aug 16, 2007, 10:19 AM

Why is there so much pain?
Everyday we wonder that.
We ask why do people we love die?
They say it's just there time.
We ask why does it hurt so much,
and is there a way stop the pain.
We wonder to ourselves.
There is so much going on in the world today.
So what one more life lost!!
No one knows of the pain we have been through,
unless they been through it too.
All we can do is why and
how can we stop the pain,
that we feel deep inside.
There are a lot of times we blame ourselves.
We ask why did it have to be him or her,
why not me ?
They say it's not your time yet.
we ask but why?
There is so much pain in today's world.
Are we the ones chosen to help ease the pain
of today's world.
Maybe by helping the people we know.
Who are going through ruff time.
Maybe by doing this ,
it my help us ease,
or pains as well.

BAUTIFULSOUL · Aug 19, 2007, 11:16 PM

i like this poem. i really understand it. i can compare to it, the pain i mean. my aunt died and she was so close to me that it hurt so much that i cried myself to sleep for a whole week or more, i forgot. so i really understand it. GOOD JOB!!=)

chrystalann2004 · Aug 20, 2007, 09:33 AM

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Originally Posted by BAUTIFULSOUL

i like this poem. i really understand it. i can compare to it, the pain i mean. my aunt died and she was so close to me that it hurt so much that i cried myself to sleep for a whole week or more, i forgot. so i really understand it. GOOD JOB!!=)

thanks for the comment
i to what it like to your self to
sleep.
i glad like it has well thanks again

*RayMe* · Aug 20, 2007, 09:37 AM

unanswered questions... theres a lot of it but always come with one answer... ^^
i like this poem...keep up the good work ok

btw...the font colour black goes with the mood
of the poem...

chrystalann2004 · Aug 20, 2007, 10:00 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by RayMe

unanswered questions... theres a lot of it but always come with one answer... ^^
i like this poem...keep up the good work ok

btw...the font colour black goes with the mood
of the poem...

there may be a lot of unanswered questions
i know
just with every that been going on lately
it hard at time dealing with greif and see people suffur
that can put in is why.

Thank you for the comment
and i glad you like it.

Aug 16, 2007, 10:19 AM	#1 (permalink)
chrystalann2004 Otaku Join Date: May 2007 Location: Salt Lake City, U.T. Posts: 150 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Credits: 1,633	Pains of the world Why is there so much pain? Everyday we wonder that. We ask why do people we love die? They say it's just there time. We ask why does it hurt so much, and is there a way stop the pain. We wonder to ourselves. There is so much going on in the world today. So what one more life lost!! No one knows of the pain we have been through, unless they been through it too. All we can do is why and how can we stop the pain, that we feel deep inside. There are a lot of times we blame ourselves. We ask why did it have to be him or her, why not me ? They say it's not your time yet. we ask but why? There is so much pain in today's world. Are we the ones chosen to help ease the pain of today's world. Maybe by helping the people we know. Who are going through ruff time. Maybe by doing this , it my help us ease, or pains as well. Last edited by chrystalann2004; Aug 17, 2007 at 09:51 AM.
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Aug 19, 2007, 11:16 PM	#2 (permalink)
BAUTIFULSOUL Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: ontario, canada Posts: 125 Thanks: 0 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Credits: 2,187	Re: Pains of the world i like this poem. i really understand it. i can compare to it, the pain i mean. my aunt died and she was so close to me that it hurt so much that i cried myself to sleep for a whole week or more, i forgot. so i really understand it. GOOD JOB!!=) __________________ IF YOU LISTEN CLOSELY, YOU CAN HEAR MY HEART BEATING FOR YOU. THIS BEAUTIFUL SIG MADE BY LASURA=D
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RayMe 1 )3^^( )N Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Somewhere i would love to leave right now for somewhere better... Posts: 3,606 Thanks: 55 Thanked 27 Times in 24 Posts Credits: 59,502	Re: Pains of the world unanswered questions... theres a lot of it but always come with one answer... ^^ i like this poem...keep up the good work ok btw...the font colour black goes with the mood of the poem... __________________ Legion Ketsueki Lives on~!! The best ever Lasura~! >>>myspace<<<
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