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    Pains of the world

    Why is there so much pain?
    Everyday we wonder that.
    We ask why do people we love die?
    They say it's just there time.
    We ask why does it hurt so much,
    and is there a way stop the pain.
    We wonder to ourselves.
    There is so much going on in the world today.
    So what one more life lost!!
    No one knows of the pain we have been through,
    unless they been through it too.
    All we can do is why and
    how can we stop the pain,
    that we feel deep inside.
    There are a lot of times we blame ourselves.
    We ask why did it have to be him or her,
    why not me ?
    They say it's not your time yet.
    we ask but why?
    There is so much pain in today's world.
    Are we the ones chosen to help ease the pain
    of today's world.
    Maybe by helping the people we know.
    Who are going through ruff time.
    Maybe by doing this ,
    it my help us ease,
    or pains as well.
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    Re: Pains of the world

    i like this poem. i really understand it. i can compare to it, the pain i mean. my aunt died and she was so close to me that it hurt so much that i cried myself to sleep for a whole week or more, i forgot. so i really understand it. GOOD JOB!!=)

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    Re: Pains of the world

    Quote Originally Posted by BAUTIFULSOUL View Post
    i like this poem. i really understand it. i can compare to it, the pain i mean. my aunt died and she was so close to me that it hurt so much that i cried myself to sleep for a whole week or more, i forgot. so i really understand it. GOOD JOB!!=)
    thanks for the comment
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    i glad like it has well thanks again

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    Re: Pains of the world

    unanswered questions... theres a lot of it but always come with one answer... ^^
    i like this poem...keep up the good work ok
    btw...the font colour black goes with the mood
    of the poem...

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    Re: Pains of the world

    Quote Originally Posted by RayMe View Post
    unanswered questions... theres a lot of it but always come with one answer... ^^
    i like this poem...keep up the good work ok
    btw...the font colour black goes with the mood
    of the poem...

    there may be a lot of unanswered questions
    i know
    just with every that been going on lately
    it hard at time dealing with greif and see people suffur
    that can put in is why.

    Thank you for the comment
    and i glad you like it.

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