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    Paint The Lily

    Sometimes things have a way of falling into place,
    other times it's better not to give chase.

    Denial held strong,
    you never know you have till it's gone.

    This world is a defective playground full of
    swingsets and merry-go-rounds waiting to throw you off
    the ride.

    We're piling bibles and crosses high, eventually
    what goes up must come down.

    We've settled in our comfort and our thousand
    dollar beds, while others are starving, hanging
    by a thread.
    Dear Dinah...

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    Re: Paint The Lily

    Wow.....very inspirational!!!!!!!!
    Great meaningful words!!!!!!!!!
    Nice job!!!!!!!
    DO NOT MAKE ME UNLEASH MY INNER DEMON

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    Re: Paint The Lily

    Why thank you.
    Even though I wrote it...I wish I could have had more ideas so it could have been longer
    Dear Dinah...

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    Re: Paint The Lily

    Oh my. Not a bad poem. In fact, I really like it. Keep up the great work. ^_^

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    Re: Paint The Lily

    Thankies.
    Personally...I wrote it and I don't really like it lol.
    I guess I am just weird.
    I think I could have done better on it.
    Dear Dinah...

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    Re: Paint The Lily

    "This world is a defective playground full of
    swingsets and merry-go-rounds waiting to throw you off
    the ride."

    love the wording @.@ nicely done... powerful yet simple poem... keep it up!

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    Re: Paint The Lily

    I don't see how I hate my poem...yet everyone else likes it O.o...Oh well I am glad you all do...yay!
    Dear Dinah...

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    Re: Paint The Lily

    I like this poem a lot! I especially like the use of metaphors in this piece. You have a very colorful vocabulary. This is well written. Keep up the good work! ^_^


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