here is a poem i wrote a little while ago...yah. enjoy and please comment...i enjoy peoples' views on my poetry and whatnot ^.^
I wait. secretly
I smile. secretly
I will devour you. secretly
if you'll allow me...
I laugh. indiscreetly
I cry. maddeningly
I ask why. honestly
you've opened up something you shouldn't have
what a foolish boy
you should have never smiled at me
should have never wrapped your arms around me
I stand resolute
I am most patient. secretly
come to me then
allow my lips to explore your flesh
is it sweet?
my lamb, I shall soon find out.
very awesome poem ,this poem drips with lust
and and in the end that what most people want
,but it is never really satisfied you just want more
. this is what i got from the poem anyway i loved it
Very nice poem, Uten! It is unique - I haven't came across to read with this kind of style. You got a nice theme going on!! I believe this is the first poem I read of yours, so please post some more, and then, I can better judge your poems.
Oh yeah, haven't seen you in a while at AO. Glad to see you post again. ^_^