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Oct 05, 2006, 03:43 PM
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 Newbie  | Pandoras' Box here is a poem i wrote a little while ago...yah. enjoy and please comment...i enjoy peoples' views on my poetry and whatnot ^.^ Pandoras' Box I wait. secretly I smile. secretly I will devour you. secretly if you'll allow me... I laugh. indiscreetly I cry. maddeningly I ask why. honestly you've opened up something you shouldn't have what a foolish boy you should have never smiled at me should have never wrapped your arms around me I stand resolute I am most patient. secretly come to me then allow my lips to explore your flesh is it sweet? my lamb, I shall soon find out. |
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Oct 05, 2006, 03:53 PM
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| King Of Darkness  Join Date: May 2006 Location: someplace where the only light is the moon above
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 Credits: 5,581 | very awesome poem ,this poem drips with lust and and in the end that what most people want ,but it is never really satisfied you just want more . this is what i got from the poem anyway i loved it
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Oct 05, 2006, 03:53 PM
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Credits: 18,292 | Very nice poem, Uten! It is unique - I haven't came across to read with this kind of style. You got a nice theme going on!! I believe this is the first poem I read of yours, so please post some more, and then, I can better judge your poems. Oh yeah, haven't seen you in a while at AO. Glad to see you post again. ^_^
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