Paper Doll

Shu · Dec 04, 2006, 05:57 PM

We've been writing on the wall,
Precious paper doll,
The pages fall apart

I just can't shake it from my head,
And all the things you said,
They only break my heart

icewolf · Dec 05, 2006, 07:34 PM

nice peom dood . its real good

*Kasai* · Dec 06, 2006, 03:34 AM

Wee! The title pulled me in and the poem kept me reading. Awesome job. I want more to the poem! I feel as if you can expound on this paper doll. Give it a try and add more to the poem.

babepooh15 · Dec 06, 2006, 11:01 AM

it was good

great work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

keep it up i know i was going to read something different when i read the title

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icewolf Newbie Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: alone in a corner Posts: 23 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Re: Paper Doll nice peom dood . its real good __________________ (\__/) (='.'=) ('')_('') This is Bunny. I eat bunnies. I apologize to jaderabbit i dont eat bunnies nomore.
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Kasai Domme Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Florida Posts: 2,745 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Re: Paper Doll Wee! The title pulled me in and the poem kept me reading. Awesome job. I want more to the poem! I feel as if you can expound on this paper doll. Give it a try and add more to the poem. __________________ Seduced by Flesh
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babepooh15 Newbie Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Michigan Posts: 53 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Re: Paper Doll it was good great work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! keep it up i know i was going to read something different when i read the title __________________ poohs my boo
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