nice peom dood . its real good
We've been writing on the wall,
Precious paper doll,
The pages fall apart
I just can't shake it from my head,
And all the things you said,
They only break my heart
nice peom dood . its real good
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This is Bunny. I eat bunnies. I apologize to jaderabbit i dont eat bunnies nomore.
Wee! The title pulled me in and the poem kept me reading. Awesome job. I want more to the poem! I feel as if you can expound on this paper doll. Give it a try and add more to the poem.
Seduced by Flesh
it was goodgreat work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
keep it up i know i was going to read something different when i read the title
poohs my boo
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