solking

This was first written in Spanish but I recently translated it for those who didn't understand. It sounds alot better in Spanish than it does in English. A bit different from my usual dark stuff.

Amor de mi vida
Quieria decirte cuanto te amo
Habia tiempos cuando quieria dejar de amarte
Porque era muy duro
Y habia otro
Uno que me quiere amar
No quieria eso
No quieria alguien que va hacer todo para estar conmigo
Yo quiero alguien que me veulves loco
Y cuando yo hablo con ella me ponga nervioso
Y nunca me acabo de estar movido por su belleza
Mi amor solamente quiero estar contigo
Tu eres mi todo
No
Eres mas que you quieria en una persona
Y yo no quiero nadie mas
Mi amor te amo
Y Para siempre
Yo quiero amarte

Love of my life
I wanted to tell you how much I love you
There were times when I wanted to stop loving you
Becuase it was too hard
And there was another
One who wanted to love me
But i didnt want that
I didnt want someone who would do anything to be with me
I wanted someone that drives me crazy
And when I talk to her it get nervous
And I will never stop being moved by her beauty
My love I only want to be with you
You are my all
No
You are more than what I wanted in another person
And I dont want anyone else
My love I love you
And forever
I want to love you

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BlueFox1

This is a great poem! I like the spanish version of the poem! Well either way it shows the emotion you have for this person who ever she is! Great Job!!!

BlueFox1

Princess Zelda14

thats a really grate poem!!!! its really good!!!

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"... And then, a ray of light pierced the darkness. The light turned into a figure of a person who was followed by a fairy, and also held the spirit of the forest..."



thats great!! thank you!!

Kasai

Solking, this very impressive. I remember my attempt at wrting in another language for poetry. I only got about 10 words. Lol. You however? Wonderful, it's something different and it's a cute poem.

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solking

Thank you...
Spanish was my first language... so its kinda easy for me

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princesslady

muy ben. excellente senor.
donde eres usted?

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KuRuMi ^.^ [くるみ] NoiR

really awesome poem. i really liked it, but i would like to know if u actually speak spanish currently... cuz there are lotta grammar mistakes. i speak spanish too. but if u spend much time w/o speak u can forget some things =]

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Carpe Diem. Quam minimum credula postero! (:

Wishing, waiting, dreaming..

solking

Yes well I know about the grammar mistakes and I haven't really spoken Spanish in a while eventhough it was my first language. Living in New York for so long is making me forget.

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