This is a great poem! I like the spanish version of the poem! Well either way it shows the emotion you have for this person who ever she is! Great Job!!!
BlueFox1
This was first written in Spanish but I recently translated it for those who didn't understand. It sounds alot better in Spanish than it does in English. A bit different from my usual dark stuff.
Amor de mi vida
Quieria decirte cuanto te amo
Habia tiempos cuando quieria dejar de amarte
Porque era muy duro
Y habia otro
Uno que me quiere amar
No quieria eso
No quieria alguien que va hacer todo para estar conmigo
Yo quiero alguien que me veulves loco
Y cuando yo hablo con ella me ponga nervioso
Y nunca me acabo de estar movido por su belleza
Mi amor solamente quiero estar contigo
Tu eres mi todo
No
Eres mas que you quieria en una persona
Y yo no quiero nadie mas
Mi amor te amo
Y Para siempre
Yo quiero amarte
Love of my life
I wanted to tell you how much I love you
There were times when I wanted to stop loving you
Becuase it was too hard
And there was another
One who wanted to love me
But i didnt want that
I didnt want someone who would do anything to be with me
I wanted someone that drives me crazy
And when I talk to her it get nervous
And I will never stop being moved by her beauty
My love I only want to be with you
You are my all
No
You are more than what I wanted in another person
And I dont want anyone else
My love I love you
And forever
I want to love you
Last edited by solking; Sep 12, 2006 at 05:00 AM. Reason: I forgot to put in the new edits.
This is a great poem! I like the spanish version of the poem! Well either way it shows the emotion you have for this person who ever she is! Great Job!!!
BlueFox1
thats a really grate poem!!!! its really good!!!
"... And then, a ray of light pierced the darkness. The light turned into a figure of a person who was followed by a fairy, and also held the spirit of the forest..."
thats great!! thank you!!![]()
Solking, this very impressive. I remember my attempt at wrting in another language for poetry. I only got about 10 words. Lol. You however? Wonderful, it's something different and it's a cute poem.
Seduced by Flesh
Thank you...
Spanish was my first language... so its kinda easy for me
muy ben. excellente senor.
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Born to rule, raised to lead, taught to establish: The African Queen
really awesome poem. i really liked it, but i would like to know if u actually speak spanish currently... cuz there are lotta grammar mistakes. i speak spanish too. but if u spend much time w/o speak u can forget some things =]
Carpe Diem. Quam minimum credula postero! (:
Wishing, waiting, dreaming..
Yes well I know about the grammar mistakes and I haven't really spoken Spanish in a while eventhough it was my first language. Living in New York for so long is making me forget.
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