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    Re: Para Mi Amor (spanish and english)

    sorry i have to butcher your poem. But the grammar is poor. and also you write very good poetric prose, as it comes to poetry itself you just need to watch the punctuation.
    I liked it so much better in english, maybe cause i speak, think and write in spanish.
    im not saying any of this cause i wanted to say that u are bad, is cause i really want you to grow more into the spanish language. I think the poem itself would captive anyone in essence you just need to perfect grammar and orthography.
    Best of wishes
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    Wicked poem! I loved the spanish version! I wonder what a poem would sound like in german... QUICK! TO THE MOOSEMOBILE!!!!

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